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Time Management


Overachievers R Us!

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2016 Poet Of The Year
Dean Kuch
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Some people dre...
 
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Rachelle,
I like how you abstained from using two of the same old, run-of-the-mill antonyms we've all seen so many times before for these types of poems in lieu of something different.
Refreshing.
Most of the time (but not always, unfortunately) the more sophisticated the wordage and imagery used spells winner, winner, chicken dinner.
Best of luck to ya.
~Dean


 Comment Written 18-May-2019



reply by the author on 18-May-2019
    Bawwwwwk! Bawwwwk!
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Aussie
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Congrats on All Time Best. You have expressed exactly what the spider does. Working, repairing, catching, eating and so forth. Good luck in the contest. I liked it's simplicity.


 Comment Written 18-May-2019



reply by the author on 18-May-2019
    Glad you liked it! Thank you for this wonderful review. xo
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duchessofdrumborg
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"Time Management", is short, succinct and very much to the point. This talented poet's work is delightfully descriptive. To me, this is a six, but sadly I only have fives left. I look forward to reading your next post.


 Comment Written 18-May-2019



reply by the author on 18-May-2019
    A warm and encouraging review, like this one, is worth more than a sixth star would ever be. Thank you, Duchessof Drumborg. xo

reply by duchessofdrumborg on 18-May-2019

    Rachelle Allen,
    We seem to think and feel the same way.
    Take care and God bless,
    the Duchess xo

reply by the author on 18-May-2019
    That feel comforting to me! xo

reply by duchessofdrumborg on 19-May-2019

    I'm delighted to hear that!
    the Duchess xo
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our business is to be busy. our business is our activities we have to go through during the day. the end of the day is the end of our unconscious business that we go through when we're busy. your poem was created with creativity. thanks for the read. "your so vein" means mood or humor.

your so vein
godlucifer


 Comment Written 17-May-2019



reply by the author on 17-May-2019
    Thank you for this review!
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Bill Pinder
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I like this poem about overachievers with all the endless activities that they undertake and then pass out at the end of the day unconscious. Thanks for sharing and good luck in the contest!
Bill


 Comment Written 16-May-2019



reply by the author on 16-May-2019
    I appreciate this, Bill. Thank you!
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Ideasaregems-Dawn
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Oh, I loved the rest of the poem -- I truly did -- but your choice of ending doesn't sit well with me because I don't think "unconscious" is a proper antonym for "busy". Perhaps "idle"?


 Comment Written 16-May-2019



reply by the author on 16-May-2019
    I do know what you're saying - and others have said it, too. But I think it's more likely they'd be unconscious after all that activity than 'idle.' Hopefully I won't be DQ'ed by the committee voting commences. Thank you for your feedback. I appreciate it very much.
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I like the artwork you choose to go with your poem and they are a perfect match.
I had to saw because your words are so true we writers losing control of place and time
when in a mood to write our minds moves just the insect in the photo
thank you for sharing
cookie


 Comment Written 16-May-2019



reply by the author on 16-May-2019
    My pleasure. And thank YOU for the very encouraging review!

reply by misscookie on 16-May-2019
    It was my pleasure
    Cookie
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Maria Jose Garcia
 
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I'm with you. Fanstory keeps us busy. And then there is the housework, going to work.
I like the sound of all the -ing words put together.
Thanks for sharing and good luck in the contest.


 Comment Written 16-May-2019



reply by the author on 16-May-2019
    Thank you! I'm glad you liked this.
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LOL! I'm exhausted after reading this poem. Add feeding the pets, exercising them, and cleaning up after them. Love your artwork choice! Now, excuse me...I need to go "unconscious."


 Comment Written 16-May-2019



reply by the author on 16-May-2019
    I hear that!! I love this review. Thank you, Wry Writer.
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Dolly'sPoems
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He he he, this made me smile! This sounds like one of my typical days and the only time I truly relax is when I am in bed! I loved every word, good luck with the contest, love Dolly x


 Comment Written 16-May-2019



reply by the author on 16-May-2019
    I'm with you all the way, Dolly! Thanks for reviewing this and for your well-wishes for the contest.
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