I enjoyed the writing, message, delivery and philosophy! Many people do great things and you are exactly right, they sure don't expect to not accomplish the task. The rhythm and flow is smooth and just the right pace. Wonderful write for this reader. xoxo Kiwi
A lovely tribute to those who created and tread the path before us. They dared and they won and so we should recognize that Is basically what life is all about. To find our niche and follow persistently until we find success. One thing comes first... know thyself.
Good job - and true - they deserve their day in the sun - a few typos I think - altho the poem still reads ok - and a few rhythm places that could be stronger - for ex: "and win for all mankind" - don't need the "of"
Just my opinion.