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Dangerous to hike through woods by yourself.

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Ross E Silke
 
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This is interesting and I think you speak a lot of truth in the matter here. Exellent composition with the restrictions given. You met the limitations well and draw out a clear statement in this. Yes, one needs to heed to the warnings in this and I think you create the warning sign for them very well.


 Comment Written 12-Apr-2020


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This is a very strong cautionary tale. I am aware of a woman disappearing on the Long Trail not too far from me. I have a friend who hikes on her own. I put a shield of protection around her. I worry even though she has hiked in all kinds of conditions and is very experienced. She used to hike with 2 others who I also worried about. For the last 3 years she's been going alone. Thank you for writing this poem to raise people's conscious.


 Comment Written 20-Dec-2019



reply by the author on 29-Dec-2019
    As early as this week women, mothers children have been reported missing kidnapped some found deceased. Perhaps you should show your friend newspaper clippings and NBC NEWS. www.libertyjustice books.com. liberty justice
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No matter how cautious we are, it still happens to the least expecting. Where has the world gone. ? Perfectly done piece for the 5-7-5 contest entry. Good job


 Comment Written 17-Nov-2019


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Another excellent haiku, L. J. And it can be a sick and twisted world out there, that's for sure. I remember as a kid we walked all over in our small town and never thought about being in danger. If I had a child now days, there is no way I would let them do the same.


 Comment Written 20-Oct-2019



reply by the author on 21-Oct-2019
    Thanks for great testimonial. I shouldn't have been allowed walk by myself either. Thanks lovely stars lolol liberty justice
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This is a very well written 5-7-5 poem you have penned about the dangers that lurk in the woods. You used very good words and when people come up missing. Thank you for sharing this. love and blessings, Teri


 Comment Written 08-Sep-2019



reply by the author on 14-Sep-2019
    Thanks so much exceptional stars great review lolol liberty justice
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Hi Liberty.
Speaking of journeys in the woods if you like horror watch this movie called..

"Back Country."
It will maze you!
...
Short as sweet as this and you are!
Doctor Ricky 1024


 Comment Written 24-Aug-2019



reply by the author on 27-Aug-2019
    Thanks Ricky! What you been up to? Put my new website your Facebook Twitter page send to friends: www.libertyjusticebooks.com. lolol liberty
    justice
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This is very powerful, sad and scares the crud out of me. I had a good friend's little brother disappear in 1976 and they found him in a shallow grave. It still haunts their family, even after eventually finding the truth some thirty years on. Well done. As ever. Bruce.


 Comment Written 15-Jul-2019



reply by the author on 28-Aug-2019
    Thanks King lovely stars. People have to watch their kids closely. Read Review more. liberty justice
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You would think, with all the publicity that disappearances receive, people would be more cautious. They probably just think, "Nothing's going to happen to me". Unfortunately, that is not true many times, and then friends and family are left with the loss of someone precious to them. I'm glad you posted this because remembering it could turn out to be something that will wind up keeping them alive if they were thinking about going alone to someplace dangerous. Blessings always, Spangle



 Comment Written 07-Jul-2019



reply by the author on 23-Sep-2019
    Thank you! You are so sweet. Lovely review and stars. A high school student sitting around in his car was shot and killed by two gunman last night.
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It seems like danger lurks everywhere these days. You can be abducted on your way back from school or from your car in your driveway. Sometimes
younger people think it won't happen to them or that the woods are close to home so have to be safe.
Keep writing.
Joan


 Comment Written 03-Jul-2019



reply by the author on 03-Jul-2019
    Thanks Joan great review.lolol liberty justice

reply by dragonpoet on 04-Jul-2019
    No problem, LJ
    Joan
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Very mysterious! I can tell there is an untold story behind it, and though we can make any prediction we want, we may never truly know what happened to these victims. It's dangerous to venture out alone, but so many of us thirst for adventure.


 Comment Written 16-Jun-2019



reply by the author on 29-Jun-2019
    Thank you excellent review.lolol liberty justice
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