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Done in Hank William style

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First--I'm glad to hear that this is fictional-second, as a Hank Williams fan, you certainly nailed his style- I can almost hear him singing this to Audrey!
Well done as always --you seem to hit a nerve with every poem.

All the Best!

Phil


 Comment Written 01-Jun-2019


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Hi, Jay You certainly hit the nail on the head with the emotional likeness of your poetry and Hank Williams songs. I am a big country fan and can relate to both in lyrics. Very good poem, my friend. :) Bob


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A well done poem of lost love. So appropriate for those melancholy country songs, which you have emulated well. I like the four-syllable lines that read so easily. Marilyn


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I heard Hank on the radio, live, I think, on the Opry...but I was only six when the man died, and it was my dad and mom saying that was Hank,
and they preferred his humorous songs...excellent poem.


 Comment Written 01-Jun-2019


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Hello Jay,
This is written just like the old country songs
like those of Hank Williams.
Simple, but straight to the point and heart.
Nice rhymes, a clear story
and a great end line: Love wins again."
Well done
Only five's left
Robert


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Thank you for letting us know you were taking on the persona of Hank Williams and not relating a tragedy in your own life. I admired your short, rhymed quatrains, which could be emotional song lyrics. Sighs- Joan


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Yes, he was highly successful and respected songwriter, so this this is an excellent copy of the famous style, but a really another form of tetrametic couplet rhyming in diameter, but wonderfully written my friend, love the sheer magic rhythm of it. Well done, blessjngs, Roy


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This is very well written, Jay. I like the smooth easy flow of your words and your rhyming is perfect. Very well done...Bill


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Hey Jaybird 1 it may be fictional but many can feel the words as they hit home. :) I haven't heard Hank Williams in a long time. You got a good poem here. You should delete the last letter in this line. "my life is done.r" Thank you for sharing.


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Yes, Jay, it most certainly could be a bio of country & western singing sensation--the legend--Hank Williams.
The wording may be simple, 'tis true.
But the message the poem coveys is anything but.
Bravo, and here's to the weekend.
~Dean


 Comment Written 01-Jun-2019


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