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Life of the Party


Being able to get noticed is a life skill

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Michele Harber
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FSBFF, this shows your usual wit, and just how adept you are at the twist ending. Of course, the fact that they offered "cocktail weiners" did give away that they were talking to a dog. After all, if they were speaking to a woman, they'd have been offering their "foot-longs." ;-)


 Comment Written 08-Jun-2019



reply by the author on 08-Jun-2019
    Oh, now Michele Harber!!! Is that typed with the same fingers you braid your daughter's hair??? Tsk, tsk, HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA, tsk, tsk, you're so freaking hilarious, tsk, tsk, hahahahahaha...

reply by Michele Harber on 08-Jun-2019
    Luckily, since we got her hair cut, it's too short to braid, so I guess I'm safe on that count. In all fairness to me, of course, can you honestly say you've ever met a man whose come-on line was, "Wanna see my cocktail weiner?" Just sayin' ...

reply by the author on 08-Jun-2019
    No, but I never had anyone offer a foot-long, either. The closest encounter of that kind was a guy who asked me if I'd like some hot stew. (His name was Stew.) (I declined.)

reply by Michele Harber on 08-Jun-2019
    If I were you, I'd have declined just on the basis that you had a much more sophisticated sense of humor than he did (and, apparently, than I do).

reply by the author on 08-Jun-2019
    Plus he was missing teeth...

reply by the author on 08-Jun-2019
    (call me shallow...)

reply by Michele Harber on 08-Jun-2019
    I hope you?re getting royalties off the song of the same name.

reply by Michele Harber on 08-Jun-2019
    At least I now know the inspiration for your ?False Teeth? entry.

reply by the author on 08-Jun-2019
    I knew you were going to say that!!! I honest-to-gawd KNEW that was your next comment!!!

reply by the author on 08-Jun-2019
    Ohhh, yeah; absolutely. (What I'll probably get is a copyright infringement letter!!)
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Hi Rachelle,

Lol, I really liked this piece. It funny when you get to the end, expecting a brief jealousy tale but it's nothing of the sort.

Nice one and best of luck with it.
G


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reply by the author on 08-Jun-2019
    Thank you, GMG. I appreciate the review. xo
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It sounds like you et some real classy fellas. What was desert, smores? Sounds like my kind of shindig. I have never been to Arkansas, but it seems charming.


 Comment Written 07-Jun-2019



reply by the author on 07-Jun-2019
    Dogs aren't as discerning as you! Thanks for the amusing review. xo
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This is really funny Rachelle. What are you saying or trying not to say? I can get quite a few different things from this. Vet's orders. Now that's pretty PRICELESS! You're cracking me up and I can't take any more! I could probably go into some detail, but, that's not necessary. Thanks for making me laugh with this humorous work that you've penned here. Well done! Keep them coming.


 Comment Written 07-Jun-2019



reply by the author on 07-Jun-2019
    I love dribble fiction because it leads the reader down one road and then surprises them with a surprise at the end of it. I'm glad you had a good FS laugh today, Jeffrey. Thanks for your delightful review. xo
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Hello Rachelle Allen,
Lovely piece of General Fiction meeting the required norms, and transparently depicting its theme.
Impressive and perfectly matching the theme phraseology.
"..."Stop!" I cry. "No spicy foods. Vet's orders."
Best of Luck!


 Comment Written 07-Jun-2019



reply by the author on 07-Jun-2019
    Thank you, RPSaxena! xo

reply by RPSaxena on 08-Jun-2019
    Rachelle Allen, Most Welcome
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    Have a pleasant weekend!
    ~ RP

reply by the author on 08-Jun-2019
    The same to you. xo
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Oh how clever you are. I never guessed that you were describing men's reaction to a horse, or was it a dog? Either way I was convinced that y he object of the men's interest was a beautiful young woman. Very good job of deception.


 Comment Written 07-Jun-2019



reply by the author on 07-Jun-2019
    Definitely a dog, Nomi! Horses have no place at my house parties!

    Thanks for the excellent review. xo

reply by nomi338 on 07-Jun-2019
    Thank you for your excellent job of fooling me so artfully.

reply by the author on 07-Jun-2019
    Oh, it is my pleasure!! Thank you for liking me anyway afterward!
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A very well-written fifty word flash fiction. When a girl is the life of the party all the men will try to get her attention and will do anything to win her favor.


 Comment Written 07-Jun-2019



reply by the author on 07-Jun-2019
    So true!
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Hahahaha, Rachelle, you certainly had me fooled on this on until the very end. So it's all bout your pet who's not allowed to take part in the fun. Great entry for the contest. All best. Ulla:)))


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reply by the author on 07-Jun-2019
    Thanks, Ulla, for laughing along! I appreciate the fun review. xo
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Haaaaaaa, this is just terrific Rachelle. You gotta love a shiny coat and what a wonderfully bit of misdirection in this perfect fifty word flash.

I'm wishing you much great luck with the Contest Committee with this gem. :)

Gloria


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reply by the author on 07-Jun-2019
    I appreciate that very much, Gloria. Thank you! xo
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This made me smile as your pet moves among the guests hoping for tit-bits but of course we can't feed our pets rubbish even if we humans drink poison often! He he he, love Dolly x


 Comment Written 07-Jun-2019



reply by the author on 07-Jun-2019
    That's right; we want BETTER for them!!! (They're nicer, after all...)
    Thanks for the fun review, Dolly. Always appreciated. xo
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