Beautiful Creatures Write a short essay about an animal - maximum 300 words. It can be a beloved pet or a wild animal you admire. The photo you include should be of the animal, or type of animal, you are describing.
I wish I had six stars for this. I'm 81 and your mind is sharper than mine.
Your poetry is excellent and portrays a very intelligent man. I enjoy your
poems immensely and look for many more. Keep writing my good friend.
Your writing is always a welcomed joy. I look forward to reading all your work. Your writing is always reality based and down to earth as well and i love it!Your daughter sounds like a blessing and wonderful person!
Thanks so much, Jay. You need not worry about answering my reviews. Just knowing that you are aware of them and still hold on doing your absolutely wonderful writing is all I need. God bless you, my dear friend Bob
I've always thought you incredible. 95 and your brain is as sharp as ever, we can see that in your poetry. I'm so sorry you have caught this contagious illness, it's attacking so many of us now, and I'm afraid there is no cure. 'Ageism' I think they call it. I call it a bummer!!! Keep writing my friend, you're amazing. :)) Sandra x
I liked the honest voice here, the matter of fact attitude, as you struggle on with all these encumberments, not being able to see. You give a great nod to your daughter, who we see helping you post your poems. Good for her. I have an elderly father, 95, his problems are his back and his loss of hearing. The trick is to keep them comfortable, and treat them with the dignity and respect they deserve. The classic format underscored the sense of a long life, of experience, of times long gone. estory
I am moved by your poetic offering! It is heartfelt and moving. My eyesight is not the best, either, but I surely look forward to each day as well!
I look forward to reading you work whenever you post.
Thankful to have found you here.
I can certainly relate to this sincere story in a well rhymed poem.
I am visually impaired with macular degeneration and get regular eye
injections.I have had cataract surgery in both eyes.
Well written poem, best wishes.