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Raffaelina Lowcock
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Your poems are stellar. It is indeed a blessing that your continue to be in control of such talent. How fortunate to have your daughter there with you. I look forward to reading anything you write.


 Comment Written 06-Jun-2019


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I wish I had six stars for this. I'm 81 and your mind is sharper than mine.
Your poetry is excellent and portrays a very intelligent man. I enjoy your
poems immensely and look for many more. Keep writing my good friend.


 Comment Written 06-Jun-2019


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Your writing is always a welcomed joy. I look forward to reading all your work. Your writing is always reality based and down to earth as well and i love it!Your daughter sounds like a blessing and wonderful person!


 Comment Written 06-Jun-2019


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Thanks so much, Jay. You need not worry about answering my reviews. Just knowing that you are aware of them and still hold on doing your absolutely wonderful writing is all I need. God bless you, my dear friend Bob


 Comment Written 06-Jun-2019


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Aww. Do not feel bad at all, it is not your fault whatsoever. It is amazing that you still have a passion and are putting it to work by doing your poems, that is the main thing.


 Comment Written 06-Jun-2019


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I've always thought you incredible. 95 and your brain is as sharp as ever, we can see that in your poetry. I'm so sorry you have caught this contagious illness, it's attacking so many of us now, and I'm afraid there is no cure. 'Ageism' I think they call it. I call it a bummer!!! Keep writing my friend, you're amazing. :)) Sandra x


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I liked the honest voice here, the matter of fact attitude, as you struggle on with all these encumberments, not being able to see. You give a great nod to your daughter, who we see helping you post your poems. Good for her. I have an elderly father, 95, his problems are his back and his loss of hearing. The trick is to keep them comfortable, and treat them with the dignity and respect they deserve. The classic format underscored the sense of a long life, of experience, of times long gone. estory


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Hello Jay!
I am moved by your poetic offering! It is heartfelt and moving. My eyesight is not the best, either, but I surely look forward to each day as well!
I look forward to reading you work whenever you post.
Thankful to have found you here.

Best Wishes!
diane


 Comment Written 06-Jun-2019


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No apology needed, totally understandable. keep writing good poems like this and I'm sure we will all keep reading them. Nicely done with this.have a wonderful day.


 Comment Written 06-Jun-2019


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I can certainly relate to this sincere story in a well rhymed poem.
I am visually impaired with macular degeneration and get regular eye
injections.I have had cataract surgery in both eyes.
Well written poem, best wishes.


 Comment Written 06-Jun-2019


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