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Gail Denham
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well sir, you are most fortunate to have a daughter who works with you . What a blessing. We have all sons - doubt I'd get that sympathy or help. I know you thank God for this lovely daughter.


 Comment Written 05-Jun-2019


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That's a terrific poem, composed with excellent rhyming and clear expression! I'm sure, from what you've written, there would be no cause for anyone to feel any pity for you. You're a lucky old codger, Jay (so am I) to have such a devoted daughter (I have a wife).

I wish you many years more of the same good fortune.
Don


 Comment Written 05-Jun-2019


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Pam (respa)
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-A lovely poem, jaybird1.
-You are more than welcome
for the support.
-I was very moved by
your poem and
appreciate your sharing it.
-You are very lucky to
have your daughter with you.
-It's enough that you are
sharing your poetry and
lovely words; that is
reward enough.
-Take care and thanks for sharing.


 Comment Written 05-Jun-2019


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I think there is a cure for cataracts these days? I think laser treatment can help. But never worry about your Fanstory friends they always find your poetry a joy to read and it is a pleasure to review them, love Dolly x


 Comment Written 05-Jun-2019


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Fear not, for the comments and replies that you produced when you were able, has built up a solid bank of good will among your friends and fellow writers here on Fan Story so much so that no further output is needed or required for you to remain in good standing with the your fellow writers.


 Comment Written 05-Jun-2019


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No apology necessary Sir, and thanks to your daughter for allowing us to share your wisdom and wit. Your poetry is always such a joy to read, for its simplicity, the great story telling, and the emotion that you provoke with your beautiful poems of life and love.

All the Best!

Phil


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Jay,
Thank you for your gracious reply poem. I understand and commend you for sharing. I wish well you well. Take care and thanks for sharing and caring. Jan


 Comment Written 04-Jun-2019


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Bless your heart my friend. I had no idea that you're 95. You've lived quite a long and full life with much more to live I hope. What a good daughter you have, bless her Darling heart. I haven't read a poem of yours that I haven't liked. That's the truth. You are a skilled writer sir and I'm thankful that I've been able to read your writing. Thanks for sharing this heartfelt and well written work. Well done and keep them coming. Bless you!


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How precious is this! To know your heart is still passionate about communicating your ideas through poetry is admirable and blessed you are to have someone who cares to help let your light shine! Thank you for sharing!?


 Comment Written 04-Jun-2019


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Teri7
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This is a very loving and very sweet poem from your heart. I am thankful you are still here to write and we can read your work. May God bless you and your daughter! Blessings, Teri


 Comment Written 04-Jun-2019


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