That's a terrific poem, composed with excellent rhyming and clear expression! I'm sure, from what you've written, there would be no cause for anyone to feel any pity for you. You're a lucky old codger, Jay (so am I) to have such a devoted daughter (I have a wife).
I wish you many years more of the same good fortune.
-A lovely poem, jaybird1.
-You are more than welcome
for the support.
-I was very moved by
your poem and
appreciate your sharing it.
-You are very lucky to
have your daughter with you.
-It's enough that you are
sharing your poetry and
lovely words; that is
-Take care and thanks for sharing.
I think there is a cure for cataracts these days? I think laser treatment can help. But never worry about your Fanstory friends they always find your poetry a joy to read and it is a pleasure to review them, love Dolly x
Fear not, for the comments and replies that you produced when you were able, has built up a solid bank of good will among your friends and fellow writers here on Fan Story so much so that no further output is needed or required for you to remain in good standing with the your fellow writers.
No apology necessary Sir, and thanks to your daughter for allowing us to share your wisdom and wit. Your poetry is always such a joy to read, for its simplicity, the great story telling, and the emotion that you provoke with your beautiful poems of life and love.
Bless your heart my friend. I had no idea that you're 95. You've lived quite a long and full life with much more to live I hope. What a good daughter you have, bless her Darling heart. I haven't read a poem of yours that I haven't liked. That's the truth. You are a skilled writer sir and I'm thankful that I've been able to read your writing. Thanks for sharing this heartfelt and well written work. Well done and keep them coming. Bless you!
How precious is this! To know your heart is still passionate about communicating your ideas through poetry is admirable and blessed you are to have someone who cares to help let your light shine! Thank you for sharing!ð?¥°