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Lance Loria
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A heartfelt emotional message which requires no apology. Your poetry is a joy to read. Keep writing and thanks for sharing. This work needs no edits or adjustments.


 Comment Written 04-Jun-2019


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HELLO JAYBIRD1: Yes...Yes you can satisfy your fans and friends upon this site, with some comment or reply. You just did, my brother...you just did. And I don't believe that any FanStorian will disagree with me. You are a member and a brother of us all...our entire community. And we are pleased to have you aboard. God bless you, and your humble loving daughter too. We all love both of you. I sincerely believe that I speak on behalf of every FanStory member. Cordially: rhonnie69.


 Comment Written 04-Jun-2019


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Hi Jaybird You are an inspiration to be still writing at 95 ( nothing wrong with a great mind I hope I can do the same ( only a young 66 LOL) My Dad was 88 when he passed and he still wrote beautiful poetry so I have hope .
Enjoy the togetherness of being a pair with your daughterI am sure she is very proud of your work and like me I loved to type out my Fathers work.
No Thanks required I will look out for your poems Cheers Christine


 Comment Written 04-Jun-2019


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My dear friend you are a rare man, that this world needs more of
You know the saying you can't please all the people all the time so don't sweat the small stuff.
God has blessed you with a talent that you and your daughter is sharing with many Praise God you can still do that.
Stay strong and on praying ground
Cookie


 Comment Written 04-Jun-2019


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You've already explained your situation to me, and I felt a little guilty for querying why, but your gracious answer satisfied me my friend. Please thank your daughter for being thoughtfully helpful for me. Beautfully written, rhyming explanation, articulate and gracious, well done, blessings, Roy
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It must be frustrating not to be able to enjoy the full FanStory experience. But how wonderful to have a devoted daughter to help you continue to post your amazing poetry.

Thank you for this gracious and poetic explanation.

Blessings, Julia


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This was a very sweet work Jay and one that will be appreciated by your readers.

You need never feel sad for not being able to respond and review. Your words are full of real emotion and a pleasure to read
hugs
Freda


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No problem. I enjoy your posts. Like you, my work is a kind of swan song of things I wish I had said back when my tongue and wit were more nimble and I believed my own lies....


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What a lovely post to share with us. I am delighted that you continue to share your wonderful talent with us and that your daughter is such a blessing to you. Thank you for your lovely poem.

Melissa


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You bring us joy with your work, Jaybird1; let that outweigh any guilt you might have about not being able to respond. I, for one, would never want you to feel bad for not responding to a review. You give the initial gift of your lovely work, I return the gift with a review. Transactions completed. Please don't let it stop you from writing more poetry. xo


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