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This is hilarious! I love the way you've turned all the s's into th's.
Teeth are really important. I wore braces as a grown up...
Thanks so much for sharing and good luck in this peculiar contest.


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reply by the author on 21-Jun-2019
    Hahaha. It IS a peculiar contest, but it's also been pretty fun to read the entries. People on here on VERY creative!

    Thanks for the fun review, Maria.
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Very funny. My wife lost a front tooth and sounded just like this. I wrote a story about it. Your poem is a great contest entry. I'm predicting a winner.


 Comment Written 20-Jun-2019



reply by the author on 20-Jun-2019
    Awww, Thomasth; thanksth tho much for thith lovely review and the well-withesth!
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What a great entry in this false teeth poetry contest. An excellently scribed,very amusing narrstive,written so one could swear one was talkingbasvthough they had no teeth, wait a minute, it is! Well written whyming couplets, well done, good luck,blessjngs, Roy


 Comment Written 20-Jun-2019



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    Thanksth tho muth for thith nithe review!!

reply by royowen on 20-Jun-2019
    Welckme
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You've written a very pithy poem.

Seriously, I love the humor and the word selection - especially the last stanza. Great take on the kind of unusual contest theme - I'm sure it will do well.


 Comment Written 20-Jun-2019



reply by the author on 20-Jun-2019
    Thanksth tho theriousthly much, Mark. I think you are pithy, too.
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rama devi
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Hilariouth fun! I especially enjoyed the alliterative: thexthy, thultry, thuccesthful me

Ha ha ha. I could hear your character's voice in my head.

Fun POV. Fun rhymes. Fun flow. Fun presentaiton. A sure contender in this contest.

The title is witty too.

Hee hee,
rd


 Comment Written 20-Jun-2019



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    Thanksth tho very muth, Rama. You are a thweetie to thay thith.

reply by rama devi on 20-Jun-2019
    Hee hee~ You're a Thweetie too!

reply by rama devi on 20-Jun-2019
    PS thweet thweet
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hello writer,
Come on, put on your new false theeth and smile at the girlsh who knows one will win your heart! Maybe she will produce a dish you cannot resist.
Best wishes in the contest

Sylvia


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    Hopefully not too cristhpy, though!!

    Thanksth, Thylvia!

reply by Sylvia Page on 20-Jun-2019
    Heh, heh!
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This is absolutely fantastic! I loved hearing it read out loud and I couldn't help but sound like Daffy Duck. Great job and I look forward to reading more of your work.


 Comment Written 20-Jun-2019



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    Thankths, Ava!! Your wordsth made me feel all thmiley and fantasthtic! xo
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Well, I guess teeth, make the man. This poem is very funny and well-written. The picture is terrific! I've read a few of these entries today, and I like this one.

Good luck in the contest!
Have a great day and God bless.
mike


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    Thanksth tho much, Papa55mike! I thintherely apprethiate thith review!
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This is very funny. My wife imitates the cartoon cat, Sylvester. Sounds exactly like you have written. I know it's a serious concern for those who have dental issues but we also need to laugh at some of the outcomes. Excellent. Hugh


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    Life ith a theriesth of challengesth. We have to be able to laugh our way through them!! (That musth be a lot easthier to do when you have a wife who can talk like Thylversther!! You hit the jackpot with that one, Hugh!)
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OK, sexy, sultry, successful you!
Whee! I really enjoyed this clever entry.
The rhyme is perfect in each amusing couplet.
I'm still smiling.
Good luck in the contest.


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reply by the author on 20-Jun-2019
    Thanksth, Barkingdog! I tho apprethiate thith review!
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