I like the uplifting and spiritual message here. It suggests balance and forgiveness, as well as the fragility that is being human. The rhyme scheme is magnetic and it flows well with the message that was presented. Beautiful piece.
As a seeker of truth, you have changed courses of living, tried hard to follow divine, rational and other orders of living, placing your fate in God's Holy Dove; well said, well done. Write to inspire, change -- DR ALCREATOR