Chapter 8 - Part 3
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Mental Wanderings


A look at the mind

  2 total reviews 
Comment by
Alcreator Litt Dear
 
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In a general and appreciable point of view, you have expressed and clarified your mental state or mind and mental wanderings, and a bit of power of mind and what it does; well said, well done. Keep writing -- DR ALCREATOR


 Comment Written 08-Jun-2019



reply by the author on 09-Jun-2019
    Thanks for the review. Made me smile.
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James W. Reynolds
 
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This is an intriguing poem. There are several lines that capture the attention, such as the mind reflecting its neighborhood. Essentially, I like how the poem meanders, but it is not aimless. The final line is excellent.


 Comment Written 08-Jun-2019



reply by the author on 08-Jun-2019
    Thanks. That actually happened.
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