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The seed that changed the way I see things

  2 total reviews 
Comment by
Dorothy Day
 
Author Rating For Short Works
 
 
Exceptional
This work has reached the exceptional level
Delightful story with a folksy voice--reading it was a pleasure. It was gritty and pleasant, terms usually at odds with each other. Ilked toe visual details, the little irony of lifesaving and not. The image of nature teaching one to accept that mere mortals are imperfect and create imperfectly is true and real. Good job.


 Comment Written 08-Jun-2019



reply by the author on 09-Jun-2019
    Thanks for the stellar review. It was a real change in me, that seed.
Comment by
RodG
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  Rank:  64 (+1)
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  Rank:  44
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  Rank:  79
 
Good
Not yet exceptional. When the exceptional rating is reached this is highlighted
You are a writer with lots to say--which is good. Many of spend all our time searching for topics. But you put this story together the way your sister put together the original bar. I think the narrative would be better if it were told in a linear fashion--or at least chronologically. Start with the stroke and then the move to Calgary, then the project and finally your epiphany--seeing the seed. You described building that bar so even I--all thumbs Rod--could understand what you were doing.


 Comment Written 08-Jun-2019



reply by the author on 08-Jun-2019
    Well thanks. But I like the way I put this story together. I will however look into your comments.
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