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The bullying continues

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I can't remember if this is part of a book or what. Terrific play anyway. Well done. No spags as far as I can see. Keep up the good work. FS wants more ho hum. Thanks again.


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    Appreciate you taking the time to read and review my script.
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Kids can be so cruel. Why do they think they have to degrade everything and everybody, I wonder.
I wonder what Ryan has in mind. I bet he would like some ice cream too. Of course those youngsters would never think of bringing him some would they. Well done. I'm hooked. Nancy:)


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    Appreciate you taking the time to read and review my script.
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Well done. The SIXES have arrived. Glad to see not all you "Up overs" have disappeared on Vacation. Look forward to where this is going. No spags. Check out my latest edit.


 Comment Written 09-Jun-2019



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    Glad you enjoyed this little script. Appreciate the review.
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Thank goodness this is to be continued. I like Ryan Craig's attitude, and I pray that he can one day show those creeps what a crippled boy can do. I am curious to see how you are going to pull that off. Show them good.


 Comment Written 08-Jun-2019



reply by the author on 09-Jun-2019
    Glad you enjoyed this little script. Appreciate the review.
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This is a very emotional read. You cannot help but feel sorry for Ryan. It's always hard to overhear bad things about oneself. Good job on the dialogue. The meanings and hurtful digs were appropriate for the tension you wanted to create. Well done.


 Comment Written 08-Jun-2019



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    Appreciate you taking the time to read and review this script.
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Kids are just plain cruel sometimes.... And I do hope that Ryan and Pugsie do show them ... in a good way: the 'ugly' behavior more often than not breeds more 'ugliness' unless a strong support system in place... :( ;( A good start to new one, Brett -- thanx for sharing! ;) ;)


 Comment Written 08-Jun-2019



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    Appreciate you taking the time to read and review my script.
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It's sad how cruel some kids can be. Ryan has a lot of determination. The other boys seem to think his condition is hopeless, but they don't really know what might happen. He may in time be able to walk again. He can certainly have ice cream, just like the other boys. Usually the boys who make fun of someone like Ryan are losers themselves, and like to have someone to pick on. If not Ryan, they'd find someone else. You might introduce your characters at the beginning. judi


 Comment Written 08-Jun-2019



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    Appreciate you taking the time to read and review my script.

reply by judiverse on 12-Jun-2019
    You're very welcome. judi
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