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In a blink of an eye


Just in time

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Patty Palmer
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Nice poem! Time is one thing is the one thing we all have in common. Time goes by for everyone so we need to make sure we use it wisely because one day in the blink of an eye.......


 Comment Written 11-Jun-2019



reply by the author on 11-Jun-2019
    Thank you so much for your review.

reply by Patty Palmer on 11-Jun-2019
    you're welcome!
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This is certainly a very unique and upbeat offering for this contest -- has a very cheerful rhythm to it! ;) I've included a few catches below... :) ;) Thank you for sharing and best of luck at the polls! ;)

us too sleep --> us to sleep

an eye no time --> an eye, no time [suggestion...]

Your back within --> You're back within


 Comment Written 10-Jun-2019



reply by the author on 10-Jun-2019
    Thank you and I have changed .
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I think we all realise how precious time is and how little we seem to have of it these days, your poem is a poignant reminder, I wish you luck with the contest, love Dolly x


 Comment Written 10-Jun-2019



reply by the author on 10-Jun-2019
    Thank you Dolly .
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