Romance Poetry and love have been synonymous since poetry was first invented. Your acrostic poem should relate to this subject. An acrostic is a poem which spells out a word or idea. Sometimes what it spells out is the the title of the poem itself. Usually the first letter of each line spells out this key word.
I'm sorry for your loss, but what a lovely tribute to someone who sounds as though he were a very special man. Your poem reflects great respect and admiration, and every rhyme hits the mark. He would undoubtedly have been very grateful.
This is a very good poem and tribute to your friend. I particularly like the first stanza. One typo you need to check
Third stanza hin (him). Very well written in perfect rhyme as usual. Take care. Jen.
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