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A Sum of the Parts


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Sylvia Page
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Hello Rachelle
It is certainly a fun poem about your life and personality and your ambitions.
I'm generally nice,
but I can get mean.
Well said!
Best regards
Sylvia


 Comment Written 14-Jun-2019



reply by the author on 14-Jun-2019
    Thanks, Sylvia. I appreciate this very nice review! xo
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Raul1
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It is awesome in thinking big in our careers. I like your personality. I think that your dark side can be erased and be a happy person. I like this poem. No grammatical errors. Good luck in the contest!


 Comment Written 14-Jun-2019



reply by the author on 14-Jun-2019
    Thanks, Raul1.

reply by Raul1 on 14-Jun-2019
    You're welcome.
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rjuselius
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indeed, writing poems is really not a matter of want but rather a must. our muse is awake all around the clock not knowing when inspiration attacks.
thank you for sharing!
blessings and a super squeeze!
rebekka x


 Comment Written 14-Jun-2019



reply by the author on 14-Jun-2019
    Thank you very much! I appreciate the nice review. xo
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Yes, God probably gave you lots of good things. I'm glad you like yourself. Trying to see you even more in my mind's eye. That's what poetry does: forces to see what we sometimes can't see. I do a lot of this kind of looking.


 Comment Written 14-Jun-2019



reply by the author on 14-Jun-2019
    That's why you're a writer!!!
    Thanks for the fun review. xo

reply by Six-Star Writer on 14-Jun-2019
    Thanks for the review of my review, Sparkles.
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Bill Schott
 
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This biographical poem, The Sum of Parts, has a fun tone to it and reminds me a bit of my motivations for keeping my writing on the light side. Love this part:

G-d gave me humor
and then He bestowed
many chances to need it.

Yes, that's irony.

The use of 'alacrity' is different than I've seen. Fun.




 Comment Written 14-Jun-2019



reply by the author on 14-Jun-2019
    That words seems to be troubling many of the members. I use that word a lot, so I've been surprised about it. Guess I'll just put my sense of humor in gear and move on!

    Thanks for the review, Bill. xo
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I really enjoyed this poem! It speaks to how everything we have was given to us by God. You perfectly captured the essence of personalities and emotions, though it is a little hard to understand with all the large words. Have a blessed day!


 Comment Written 14-Jun-2019



reply by the author on 14-Jun-2019
    Thanks, Holly.
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moongirlwriter
 
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OMGsh.. .I have a kindred spirit on this site. Thanks for being on fs and sharing your writing. This is how I live my life as well. . .I just need to add grandchildren. :) The very best with this delightful poem, hope to visit your writing again.


 Comment Written 13-Jun-2019



reply by the author on 13-Jun-2019
    I'd love that!! Thanks for the very nice review.

reply by moongirlwriter on 13-Jun-2019
    I just couldn't find your name to add you to my list. :)
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A. Willow Bends
 
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This is a wonderful, quick little read of who you are. The shortness packs in quite a bit of info, which is poetically quite a neat trick. You gave a bit of physical description, but told more about your inner self and personality, which is WHO we really are. I like this very much and think you did a great job with it. Love the puzzle pieces for a visual. Great choice. Good Luck!
Wendy


 Comment Written 13-Jun-2019



reply by the author on 13-Jun-2019
    Thanks for noticing so much here, Wendy. That's always so helpful when a reviewer does that. And thanks, too, for the well-wishes for the contest!
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Dear Author,
This is an excellent contest entry and I enjoyed your verses, which sum to a whole person from its candid parts! Your choice of words creates a realistic Bio and you come across honest and fun!
My best in winning, Deborah.


 Comment Written 13-Jun-2019



reply by the author on 13-Jun-2019
    Thank you for this really encouraging and helpful review, Deborah. I love reading what 'connected' with a reviewer, and you have done that so well here.

reply by DeborahWrite on 13-Jun-2019
    You are welcome and My pleasure!
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bob cullen
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I loved this. What a fantastic philosophy to adhere too, you'd certainly get six stars for that belief. Good luck in the contest and thank you for bringing a smile to my face


 Comment Written 12-Jun-2019



reply by the author on 12-Jun-2019
    You did, likewise, for my face when I read this review! So, thank you for that. I appreciate your kind words very much.
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