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Illegal Immigrant Laws

Laws that could result in the deportation of immigrants

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I certainly agree with the good senator about illegal immigration. I was reading just this morning that New York state wants to allow "undocumented" persons to obtain driver's licenses. I don't know what's going on. You present a lot of excellent information. When I look at videos of individuals streaming across the border, I do see some families, but I see a lot more of strong young men who might be capable of stirring trouble once they're in the US. I too am with the senator about sanctuary cities. Why some representatives think it would be a good idea to abolish ICE is hard for me to comprehend. As you can see, I could go on and on. Suffice it to say I'm with the senator. judi


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reply by the author on 20-Jun-2019
    Thanks for taking the time to read this script and pen a review. Much appreciated.

reply by judiverse on 20-Jun-2019
    Yoou're very welcome. judi
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Hi Brett. This is a hot topic which you've handled well. Anyone who has traveled the world knows that no other country would tolerate the violation of its immigration laws. Those countries who point the finger at the U.S. for trying to tighten up are the same ones who have strictly enforced laws themselves. Marilyn


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reply by the author on 20-Jun-2019
    Thanks for taking the time to read this script and pen a review. Much appreciated.
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I don't think most immigrants are criminals. They're people looking for a better life, as the first immigrants were. No doubt human traffickers need to be in jail, but what would you do with their victims? Send them home to be picked up by another trafficker? I have a problem with separating kids from their parents and throwing nannies in jail.


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    Thanks for taking the time to read this script and pen a review. Much appreciated.
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This is such an informative piece. Thank you for sharing what I'm sure many don't know when it comes to how severe our laws are. Even though there is a great deal of controversy on the subject of illegal immigrants, I hope we always err on the side of protecting our citizens! Well done and appreciated!


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reply by Diana L Crawford on 20-Jun-2019
    It was very interesting ! And you are more than welcome!
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This is a well written and professional example of a working script. I saw no evidence of SPAG. The dialog progressed nicely and suited each character in tone and construction. Nicely done and thank you for sharing it.


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Good play a lot of spags for ya though. Suggested change in following...US Code 1324 specifically elaborates [about](on) crimes related to
In the following tense is kind of confusing suggest change as follows
deterrent [for](to) illegal aliens who commit the crimes [to not] return(ing) to the United States. what are your thoughts were sanctuary cities are concenred?
what are your thoughts w(h)ere sanctuary cities are conce(r)n[r]ed? See your messages


 Comment Written 16-Jun-2019



reply by the author on 20-Jun-2019
    Appreciate the review. How do you like Scribophile?

reply by Sankey on 20-Jun-2019
    Still wanting to set up a Pen name they are not helping.
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Another great script Brett, it seems to me that illegal immigrant prosecutions are as much a Political debate as anything, it's that that out of the top felony prosecutions how many would there be locally compared to fellonies committed by aliens? Well done Brett, great plot, and an excellently plot, well done, Blessings, Roy


 Comment Written 16-Jun-2019



reply by the author on 20-Jun-2019
    Thanks for taking the time to read this script and pen a review. Much appreciated.

reply by royowen on 20-Jun-2019
    Welcome Brett.
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