Well it's certainly short but I think the committee may be looking for a little bit more when the judging rolls around. As it is you have only come up with 3 words. More than three times that was supplied by the contest.
the main thing here is that the 'story' doesn't really stand on its own without the picture, which it always should.
All the best
Comment Written 18-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 19-Jun-2019
Thanks for the review. The story fits the title. Just having a bit of fun.