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Fleeting Thoughts


my brain on synapsis...

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Hi Diana. This is a very good loop poem. When I think about my thoughts and how they tangentially lead from one thing to another it boggles the mind. Sort of like a gigantic loop poem and I guess that's what this form is all about. I enjoyed reading yours. Marilyn


 Comment Written 24-Jun-2019



reply by the author on 27-Jun-2019
    thanks so much... and thanks so much for your star-filled review on my poem... yours, Diana
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Do you ever think of someone trying to unscramble our brains - the wild spagetti of thoughts that scamper around in our head? Personally I feel it's a factoid of the female mind - I've heard it compared to a man's brain which sits solid on a RR track. At least my husband's mind does. One track.
Enjoyed your poem - It's entertaining to wander about in our thinking - plus we can plan the evening's meal , create a poem, run the wash, change the sheets, figure out what to give a grandkid for his birthday and talk to a friend needing encouragement - pretty much all at once.
Made me laugh.


 Comment Written 22-Jun-2019



reply by the author on 27-Jun-2019
    I do kiddo... thanks so much... and thanks so much for your star-filled review on my poem... yours, Diana
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What a lovely loop offering, Lady Diana!! :) ;) It's like a psychological study of the cycles that we go through in our own lives with words said and thoughts burdened....a loop of the endless loop that we write with our actions!!! :) ;) As usual, your flair and uniquely, self-abasing style shines through...and sends the reader off with a clear vision of going forward! ;) ;) Thanx for sharing, ma'am, and WELCOME BACK! :) Yvette


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LOL! LOL! This ramble is fantastic! Holding on too long to anything will drive a mind insane. Clarity and peace...saving those special truths for just the right moments. Pure gibberish is like a medal of honor. And the best part is that a hundred years from now, will it really matter?


 Comment Written 22-Jun-2019



reply by the author on 27-Jun-2019
    Hey WryWriter... thanks so much... and thanks so much for your star-filled review on my poem... yours, Diana
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So, this is loop poetry. I found it to be quite enjoyable I must say. Not sure I would be able to endure this style myself. My A.D.D. would have a field day lol
God bless
Steve


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Rant away! I admired your use of the Loop form to share your reflections. It was especially effective to take your "full circle" to reach "clarity" and "redemption". Best wishes in the contest- Joan


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This is a very, but effective piece. I don't believe I have ever seen this
type of arrangement before. I enjoyed the read and I usually only review
rhyming poetry. Very good work.


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This is ao great! I loved the theme of the piece and how it flowed, Very well done. These kinds of poems i find very hard to write, but your poem seems very natural. Thanks for sharing. :)


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The author's words were strong, clear and creative. The author's
words in this poem vented and brought the word to
"divine clarity". The reader enjoyed the intensity of this poem.
The artwork is perfect complimenting the theme and words of
this poem.


 Comment Written 21-Jun-2019


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It is interesting to me that because of your poem I now understand what loop poetry is. It kept me involved as you used the last word to begin the next statement.. It also taught me that words sometimes need explanations. And I agree strange thoughts do pop up at night. Thank you for this delightful thought provoking poem.



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