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Dear Holy Breath


A poem, song, letter, to The Holy Ghost

  3 total reviews 
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Michele Harber
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What a reverent, uplifting and hopeful poem, that goes from despair to joy with your recognition of faith and redemption. Your repetition of "I should have brought you flowers" is very powerful and shows that, as with Dorothy in "The Wizard of Oz," your power to achieve your (in this case, spiritual) goals was within your control all along. This reads very smoothly, and your rhymes work well.


 Comment Written 20-Jun-2019



reply by the author on 20-Jun-2019
    Thank you for this kind review.

reply by Michele Harber on 20-Jun-2019
    You're very welcome.
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papa55mike
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This is a very well-written poem of faith and I love the picture. I love the author notes explaining the Holy Breath and the Mother of the Universe. I need to study it. Great job!

Have a great day and God bless.
mike


 Comment Written 20-Jun-2019



reply by the author on 20-Jun-2019
    Thanks for the review. God bless you as well. May the Holy Breath breathe upon you and yours.
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This flows like a running river... I love every verse and lovely presentation to complete the whole package... Great job on this Yvon and looking forward to much more. yours, Diana


 Comment Written 20-Jun-2019



reply by the author on 20-Jun-2019
    Thanks for the review. Thought I was going to write a song but it kind of turned into a poem.

reply by Artasylum on 20-Jun-2019
    either way works for me...
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