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Bullying is on a rampage more than ever hurting innocent children along the way. The bullies are bullied by others and do this in retaliation.


 Comment Written 27-Jun-2019


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This is an adorable photo of all little blonds who look darling in their tutus. We do all try to fit in like cookie cutters. The more we are alike, the more we feel accepted. Our individuality usually blossoms as we age. Then we dare to be ourselves. Marilyn


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Thank you for sharing your cute photograph and wise message to our children in this tanka form. Best wishes in the competition and enjoy your weekend- Joan


 Comment Written 22-Jun-2019


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Well done with fine tanka write, yes indeed,the best way is by the Lord's instructions byway of dealing with the world,an excellent tanka entry in this contest Nancy, well done, good luck,blessings, Roy


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Thanks for this reminder in a creative way that God loves us and excepts us unconditionally as his children. God enables us to encourage each other and work together to advance his Kingdom. That is exactly the opposite of how the world works.
Bill


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Good message, portrayed with lucidity. I like the two-word pivot line...very effective. I also applaud the medley of S and soft C in the last two lines and the alliteraiton of F in the first two. A couple of spag suggestions:


people are not friends
when they make fun of you, dear,(; or --)
your identity
comes from God(,) who sings with you,
blesses with joy, love, and peace

Good luck in the contest!

Love,
rd


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This is a terrific Tanka entry, Nancy! Your word choices are strong and your pivot from what people think to what's really important is perfection. Good luck in the judging and thank you very much for sharing it.


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A very well-written Tanka about the bullies in the world that usually target the children of God and love to make fun of them whenever they can. We as Christians know how to handle those who go out and treat us with disrespect.


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I so agree with your words, those who degrade us and make fun of us are not friends and we soon realise this from a very young age, I wish you luck with the contest, love Dolly x


 Comment Written 21-Jun-2019


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What an adorable tanka this is, Nancy. The opening strong with people are not friends when they make fun of you. But of course they aren't.

Great job with a good insight and many good wishes to you with the Contest Committee.

Gloria


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