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15 syllable poem

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This is so true, we have to search for it inside of ourselves, some of us it takes a lifetime to realise that, others come to it easier. A lot of thought went into these 15 syllables, good luck with it G.
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valda


 Comment Written 27-Jun-2019



reply by the author on 02-Jul-2019
    Much appreciated. G
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I absolutely agree with this statement. We have to get it for ourselves. It's not transferable. If it were, we'd need replenishment every day dependent on a stranger. Good luck in the contest if it is still ongoing. Marilyn


 Comment Written 24-Jun-2019



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    Many thanks Marilyn. I haven't forgotten about Bot. I'm on my holiday (first one in 4 years!) but I am planning on catching up. G

reply by BeasPeas on 03-Jul-2019
    Hi G. I've been taking some time off myself. I hope yours was great. Marilyn
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Hi Gareth, that is fifteen syllables which state a great truth. Self worth can only be found within the person itself. Something that often takes great courage. Good luck in the contest. Ulla:))


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    Much appreciated. G
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Hi Gmg, You're completely correct in your poem. Though it certainly doesn't hurt a person to have the encouragement of others instead of the constant negativity, you're right about self-worth. It's all about how YOU see yourself, not about how others see you. When you are by yourself, how do you see yourself?
The unfortunate thing about that, is that we are all impacted by the things that go on around us. When something happens TO us (like someone telling us that we're not good enough) we start to believe it and it affects the way we see ourselves.


 Comment Written 23-Jun-2019



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    Many thanks. G
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This is so true, we have to believe, love ourselves before we can have any type of lasting relationship with others. The poem is well-written,with a strong message behind it, nice job.


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    many thanks. G
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This is so true. How can we every find a friend? How can we ever discover our real selves? Possibly, these are but rhetorical questions. But it's true, we even lie to ourselves. Sigh, I think other's constructive criticisms and indeed and our own self-reflection are but chisels used to reveal our true selves. Loren


 Comment Written 23-Jun-2019



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    many thanks, my friend. G
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Good entry for the contest. I used to worry constantly about what others thought of me. I looked for my reflection in their eyes. Now I don't give a damn.
Elaine


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reply by the author on 02-Jul-2019
    much appreciated. G
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This is true, but I still find it difficult to apply it to my own life. I pay too much attention to what other people think of me.
Thanks so much for sharing and good luck in the contest.


 Comment Written 22-Jun-2019



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    Many thanks MJ. G
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This is sooooo true. Our self-worth comes from within ourselves. If we listen to others, we'd all be suicidal or mass murderers. haha

I hope you do well in the contest.



 Comment Written 22-Jun-2019



reply by the author on 02-Jul-2019
    Many thanks E. good to see you about. G
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This is a well written entry for this contest. We spend so much of our time trying to gain validation through others when we only need to accept our selves to develop self worth. I sincerely wish you all the best in this contest. Sorry I took so long to get to this, I am still having computer problems.



 Comment Written 22-Jun-2019



reply by the author on 02-Jul-2019
    Many thanks.

reply by Sasha on 02-Jul-2019
    You are welcome.
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