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Death and life

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I guess we all have rolling death along for the ride with us throughput our lives. I find it interesting that only the third stanza rhymes.


 Comment Written 21-Jun-2019



reply by the author on 21-Jun-2019
    The rhyme just came out that way.
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"Umm.. Ah.. Shit eh!" certainly sums up life as some of us know it, but certainly not your poem, which is wonderful. That repeat line is so imaginative and a great one to hang the rest of the poem off, full of the paradoxes of life. "See-sawing my mind does swing With silent notes it tries to sing " is a pure summary of my own life.


 Comment Written 21-Jun-2019



reply by the author on 21-Jun-2019
    That was how I felt after writing this.

reply by LisaMay on 21-Jun-2019
    I hope you had a glass of warm milk and a nice lie down.
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