"Umm.. Ah.. Shit eh!" certainly sums up life as some of us know it, but certainly not your poem, which is wonderful. That repeat line is so imaginative and a great one to hang the rest of the poem off, full of the paradoxes of life. "See-sawing my mind does swing With silent notes it tries to sing " is a pure summary of my own life.
Comment Written 21-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 21-Jun-2019
That was how I felt after writing this.
reply by LisaMay on 21-Jun-2019
I hope you had a glass of warm milk and a nice lie down.