I think this is a really imaginative idea, and I really like the flow and rhythm that it has.
I found some of it difficult to read and follow, though. I know the meaning is clear, but I found I had to read a few bits a couple of times to try and work out what you were saying. I think it's because the language you use and the way you've written in phrases rather than clear sentence structures to bind these ideas together.
Much thought has gone into this poem. It touches on a lot of key issues and you use your government words dispersed well through the poem. Although I find the grammar suffers in this as it seems you have omitted a lot of prepositions, it still paints an accurate picture. The writing quality could use some improvement I think. The message and the descriptions you paint are distinct enough to understand with a second read I found. Keep writing for the best standards. I enjoyed your insights.
The author's words are strong, clear, and creative. I found this poem
to encourage and support love. I agree with this author that love
is the key in all walks of life. The poem flows and connects well.
The artwork is perfect and goes well with this poem.
May you be well and safe.....
I think religion and voting should be kept separate. Sometimes people vote with just their religion in mind and nothing else. That's not always a good thing. There is always a bigger picture, maybe love should be part of the equation.
I love the artwork you choose to go with your poem, they are a perfect match.
You captured my attention not only by the beautiful flowers but the message that you wrote. What we need is more love, not so much in words but in action.
Thank you for sharing
HI Al, no my sweet friend...the government doesn't feel love...but Jesus did come here ti teach us love...very interesting you...I love your poem...very well written...with the perfect picture...love Linda xxoo
Hello Alcreator Litt Dear,
Nice piece of Spiritual Poetry having a HIGH GLIGHT of imagination!
These two lines are particularly noteworthy:
"Enkindle all hearts with love to win vote of confidence
Empower me with love to rule over parliament"