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O God Let Love Win Parliament


A Wishful Imaginary Poem About Power of Love

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The_Boy_Whodunnit
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I think this is a really imaginative idea, and I really like the flow and rhythm that it has.
I found some of it difficult to read and follow, though. I know the meaning is clear, but I found I had to read a few bits a couple of times to try and work out what you were saying. I think it's because the language you use and the way you've written in phrases rather than clear sentence structures to bind these ideas together.


 Comment Written 12-Apr-2020


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It seems like there is much less love in the world these days--in the current tragic world, it seems very hard to find. I pray it will return one day~Debbie


 Comment Written 12-Apr-2020


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Much thought has gone into this poem. It touches on a lot of key issues and you use your government words dispersed well through the poem. Although I find the grammar suffers in this as it seems you have omitted a lot of prepositions, it still paints an accurate picture. The writing quality could use some improvement I think. The message and the descriptions you paint are distinct enough to understand with a second read I found. Keep writing for the best standards. I enjoyed your insights.


 Comment Written 11-Apr-2020


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The author's words are strong, clear, and creative. I found this poem
to encourage and support love. I agree with this author that love
is the key in all walks of life. The poem flows and connects well.
The artwork is perfect and goes well with this poem.
May you be well and safe.....


 Comment Written 11-Apr-2020


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This is a very interesting poem, it's one that I don't fully understand.

Yes, I believe that God is capable of doing anything that He wishes, however, I don't think He would choose to get involved with politics.

Happy Easter and stay safe...Bill


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I think religion and voting should be kept separate. Sometimes people vote with just their religion in mind and nothing else. That's not always a good thing. There is always a bigger picture, maybe love should be part of the equation.


 Comment Written 11-Apr-2020


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I love the artwork you choose to go with your poem, they are a perfect match.
You captured my attention not only by the beautiful flowers but the message that you wrote. What we need is more love, not so much in words but in action.
Thank you for sharing
Cookie


 Comment Written 11-Apr-2020


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HI Al, no my sweet friend...the government doesn't feel love...but Jesus did come here ti teach us love...very interesting you...I love your poem...very well written...with the perfect picture...love Linda xxoo


 Comment Written 10-Apr-2020


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Oh, yes! You are on the right track. You see all situations and their failure in the right direction. You should be in politics so you can have more influence. Great post!


 Comment Written 10-Apr-2020


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Hello Alcreator Litt Dear,
Nice piece of Spiritual Poetry having a HIGH GLIGHT of imagination!
Impressive phraseology.
These two lines are particularly noteworthy:
"Enkindle all hearts with love to win vote of confidence
Empower me with love to rule over parliament"


 Comment Written 10-Apr-2020


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