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Biography of Antonio Giuseppe McCarron

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Hi Brett, now you've set up all the characters and they are a diversified lot. Now we need to be introduced to them all and their various roles in the story. Looking forward to that. All best. Ulla:))


 Comment Written 25-Jun-2019



reply by the author on 25-Jun-2019
    Glad you enjoyed this script. Much appreciate the review.
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Well done, mate. Glad to see some SIXES around in some places. Can't remember if we picked up any spags elsewhere. Looking forward to some more of this.


 Comment Written 25-Jun-2019



reply by the author on 25-Jun-2019
    Appreciate the review. Just some idea I am toying with.
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Darlene Franklin
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I'm hooked, oh, yes. I want to see more. One question: Why is he called A.J. when his initials are A.G.? I like the use of the word "sullen." It suggests that A.J. is about to reveal something that will make the audience like him less.


 Comment Written 25-Jun-2019



reply by the author on 25-Jun-2019
    Glad you enjoyed this script. Much appreciate the review.
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Karen Luciana
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I am engaged with the story and look forward to Scene 2! I find the story of AJ's mother's illness and hospital experience very intriguing. You have my interest. Excellent job!


 Comment Written 25-Jun-2019



reply by the author on 25-Jun-2019
    Glad you enjoyed this script. Much appreciate the review.
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Well done old mate. We look forward to more of this sad story. You are good with these plays I should do more of them, myself. No spags.Keep up the good work.


 Comment Written 24-Jun-2019



reply by the author on 25-Jun-2019
    Glad you enjoyed this script. Much appreciate the review.
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That seems a really mean thing for a host to do to a young actor. Why not ask him about the new show? I can't imagine the audience wants to know about all the depressing details of his mother's illness. I know I wouldn't.


 Comment Written 24-Jun-2019



reply by the author on 25-Jun-2019
    Glad you enjoyed this script. Much appreciate the review.
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