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Berry Disgusted


Sharing doesn't apply to rodents

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CrystieCookie999
 
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Too cute! The little chipmunk enjoying berries with no thought to where he was sitting, and the thought that it might be time to move from the county. Humor by exaggeration is always fun. Thanks for such a darling poem.


 Comment Written 21-Jul-2019


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Dear Author,
This poem is another of your great ones... a collection! I loved your story, rhyme and pace! If I had 6 stars you would be awarded 6 not 5 and this one is outstanding!
My best in winning...Deborah.


 Comment Written 29-Jun-2019



reply by the author on 29-Jun-2019
    I'm happy for the five and the terrific review. Thanks for both. xo

reply by DeborahWrite on 29-Jun-2019
    My pleasure!
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Hi it is such a beautiful write ,I love it. But still I am sad o say that it was not very good to hate that little creature. Just st think of of it. Before you bought the place...or life no before t was wild and it was the place for that little creature to supply himself with food...yea? Now you are there, how could he forget this. Just let him share the natures supply with you.you will learn to like him.

Benny


 Comment Written 29-Jun-2019



reply by the author on 29-Jun-2019
    Oh, I did better than that, Benny; I gave him free reign of those berries. I never wanted to touch them again! He gets to eat every last one!

    Thanks for the fun review! xo
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Haha, a fun poem. I don't think we get chipmunks here and I haven't had many encounters with rodents, but I wouldn't like to share food with them, I don't blame you!!


 Comment Written 29-Jun-2019



reply by the author on 29-Jun-2019
    I knew you'd understand, Bichon! THANK YOU! xo
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That is kind of harsh, chipmunks don't eat Much and you're going to wash the berries any way. Good luck in the contest. Besides that chipmunk s are infinitely cleaner than other rodents.


 Comment Written 29-Jun-2019



reply by the author on 29-Jun-2019
    That's like telling me that dirt is a lot cleaner than sludge. And I don't want to eat anything where a rodent's potty parts have been; I couldn't possibly clean it well enough.
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Aww! But chipmunks are cute!
I love your poem and your title is great. You made me smile (as usual).
Thanks for sharing and good luck in the contest.


 Comment Written 28-Jun-2019



reply by the author on 28-Jun-2019
    Now, Maria, there is nothing cute about a rodent. Even one with a fancy racing stripe across his back. But I still like you anyway. And I REALLY like your review. Thank you. xo

reply by Maria Jose Garcia on 28-Jun-2019
    :)
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Haha you fussy thing, Rachel.

Your sweet berries were born to be shared. Your delicious bounty attracts all creatures of good taste. Don't walk away, tis only flattery, join them in a orgy of wanton berry worship. You will be liberated and you will embrace your new furry friends and all of nature will celebrate.

Tomorrow, who knows, maybe you will make friends with the rats who eat your waste. :)

Isn't nature wonderful?

Best
John xo


 Comment Written 28-Jun-2019



reply by the author on 28-Jun-2019
    You make it all sound SO very appealing, John. No wonder I find you so irresistible. xo

reply by Lordinajamjar on 28-Jun-2019
    Hahaha anytime sweetheart.
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"Berry Disgusted", is an extremely well-written and entertaining piece. This talented poet's piece, put a huge grin on my face! To me, this is a six, but unfortunately I only have fives left. I look forward to seeing your next post.


 Comment Written 28-Jun-2019



reply by the author on 28-Jun-2019
    When a five comes with such warm and encouraging words, it IS a six as far as I'm concerned. Thank you for this lovely review. xo
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Funny and well put together poem. Good, clear and understandable post. I am a little disappointed you allowed
the thieving little rodent to win. Good work.

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 Comment Written 28-Jun-2019



reply by the author on 28-Jun-2019
    HAHAHAH. Well, I can go to the store for strawberries, so I have an advantage that way. Every now and then, I'm that kind of gracious.

    Delightful review. Thank you, Willie. xo
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Hello,
I laughed after reading your poem, because I feel exactly as you do. You wrote in such a way that I could actually see that little creature eating your lovely strawberries. Thank you for posting.


 Comment Written 28-Jun-2019



reply by the author on 28-Jun-2019
    It was an ugly moment for me, Karen. Ugly, ugly, ugly.

    Thank you for the understand review!! xo
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