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Sharing doesn't apply to rodents

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Ben Colder
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Nothing wrong with sharing. When living in the wild it is common to do so. Though your poem speaks domestic. Awe, let him live a little everything needs a little red in their taste. LOL.


 Comment Written 26-Jun-2019



reply by the author on 26-Jun-2019
    The berries are ALLLLLLL his now!! Forever!
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Very cute and creative piece! Perfect for your contest! But surely the berries could have been washed. I sure would not let it deter me from the luscious sweet berries! LoL!


 Comment Written 26-Jun-2019



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    The sight of the rodent sitting among them (pooping? piddling?) just ended my desire for those berries for the remainder of my life. Call me a sissy.

reply by Diana L Crawford on 26-Jun-2019
    Hahaha!!!!
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You might not win your contest, but you won a smile from me. Well written and easy to read with a pleasant rhyme scheme. I've tried gardening over the years and the critters always seem to win! Bill


 Comment Written 26-Jun-2019



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    It's so true. I surrendered to that chipmunk; that's for sure!!

    I love your words "You might not win your contest, but you won a smile from me." So fabulous! Thank you.
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lol, oh my goodness, this is a really cute poem for the garden prompt. I just moved into a house that has strawberries all through the yard, I planted some before I knew as well, and sure enough, I have a family of woodchucks eating them all. lol Enjoy your weekend. ~Kerry


 Comment Written 26-Jun-2019



reply by the author on 26-Jun-2019
    Yuck. My heart goes out to you!

    Thanks for the great review. I appreciate it very much.
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But he is so cute! =} This is a really clever and fun poem. I saw no error and got the feeling that you hate rodents. I have never seen one play the piano, but I have seen them steal food from gardens. Hope you do well in the contest. Rox


 Comment Written 26-Jun-2019



reply by the author on 26-Jun-2019
    Another reviewer referred to him as "a rat with a racing stripe." Surely THAT takes away from the 'cute'?!

    Thanks for the great review, Rox.
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Aaaaaww...what do you have against these sweet little 'rats with racing stripes'?! ;) This is a fun entry and my husband would certainly agree with you on the rodents.....me? I think they're awesome to watch! ;) :) Thanx for sharing and best of luck in the contest! ;)

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 Comment Written 26-Jun-2019



reply by the author on 26-Jun-2019
    Ewwww! I'm not sure we can be friends any more. Ohhh, I take it back. You I find irresistible.

reply by Y. M. Roger on 26-Jun-2019
    Oh, good! :) You had me worried there....whoever you are.... can't wait to see this contest finish now...LOL! ;) ;)
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