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A bouquet of flowers

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Sylvia Page
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Blossoms in her hands 5
Smiled eagerly for her 6?
Singing wedding songs 5
This is a very nice Haiku but I don't get the syllable count right in the 2nd line. Did you count smiled as 2?
Sylvia


 Comment Written 27-Jun-2019



reply by the author on 27-Jun-2019
    Smi led? 2 syllables?

reply by Sylvia Page on 27-Jun-2019
    https://syllablecounter.net/count
    Smiled is one syllable.

reply by the author on 27-Jun-2019
    Thank you
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Bouquet of flowers has colourful and fragrant blossoms in her hands speak of her joy and happiness on her wedding ceremony celebrated with her smiles in wedding songs; well said, well done. Write-Inspire-Change --DR ALCREATOR


 Comment Written 27-Jun-2019



reply by the author on 27-Jun-2019
    Thanks for the review DR
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