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Angels On The Wing


Angels being born

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Comment by
moongirlwriter
 
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Very interesting poem. . .made me think of it as an end of life poem and God has begun his selection process. It is well-written whether totally understood or not. Nice job and best of luck to you if this is written for a contest.


 Comment Written 28-Jun-2019



reply by the author on 28-Jun-2019
    Thanks for the review. I understand this. I sometimes write in personal meanings.

reply by moongirlwriter on 28-Jun-2019
    :)
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Joy Graham
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Hello Yvon,

I think this is my first time reading your poetry. It's a pleasure to meet you.

I enjoyed reading your poem today :) It made me feel peaceful just thinking about angels floating around. I could use a little peace in my life lately. Especially while I wait to see a surgeon about total hip replacement surgery.

My only comment about improving your poem is not to begin every line with a capital letter. That's just a minor suggestion. The ball is in your court. You can choose to change it or not. It's not a huge deal.

Sincerely Joy xx


 Comment Written 28-Jun-2019



reply by the author on 28-Jun-2019
    Hope your surgery goes easily. We can all use a bit of peace in our hearts. I just automatically cap the first words. God Bless!!!
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