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Tribute to my great grandchild

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Hugh McDowell
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Excellent. What a great tribute to your great grandchild. I like the pace and flow of the poem. Rhyming is good. It is amazing how fast they grow and develop. Hugh


 Comment Written 01-Jul-2019


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Lovely! Perfect rhyme and a nice, easy-flowing rhythm with no awkward or forced subdivisions of a beat. Plus the message is terrific, too. This was a most pleasurable read. xo


 Comment Written 01-Jul-2019


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Awe Jay, this is a wonderful tribute to your great-granddaughter. And you got your wish and she has now grown up. It shines through how proud you are of her. I love the name as well. My favourite doll's name was Gabriella. My parent's let me choose the doll I wanted. She had real hair. This was in Venice, Italy, when I was only 3 years old. I named her after a beautiful girl who looked after me at times.
I loved your poem. Kind regards. Ulla:))


 Comment Written 01-Jul-2019


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This is such a precious tribute to your great-granddaughter! How honored she must feel to know you took the time to write a beautiful poem about her! I too have three great-grandchildren, the oldest one living with me with his parents. He is three and quite the brilliant, but also rambunctious fellow! It is my greatest joy though when he tells "GG" how pretty I am and lands a great big hug and kiss on me! Blessed doesn't even describe it!


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The poem sounds like the words of a doting grandfather, who happens to be a poet. Perhaps she'll become a writer of poems and song lyrics. Thank you for the poem.


 Comment Written 30-Jun-2019


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Hello Jay: This is a beautiful tribute to your great-granddaughter. It sounds like she's a real beauty and your wish has come true, by now she must be a full-grown lovely woman. Take care...Bill


 Comment Written 30-Jun-2019


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This sounds like a proud grandparent speaking of a talented granddaughter. I think if music and dance are her two loves that
she could probably do both. She could write her own music to
dance tol
Keep writing
Joan


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It is lovely to hear that your beloved Gabrielle has grown to prove some of your early predictions and that you have seen this development. Your pride in her is obvious, and is so well portrayed in your endearing poem.


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What a sweet, lovely poem! As we watch those precious children and grandchildren grow up, we see so much potential they may not even know
they possess, and we pray they too will see.


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Shh!! The secret is out, now that Gabrielle is grown up to be all that is written about. Time travels in waves of thought, so did sweet Gabrielle's years time sought. These are not written words on paper as you thought, but words from the heart frozen in time until would graduate to the beautiful swan. Great writing


 Comment Written 30-Jun-2019


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