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Gabrielle


Tribute to my great grandchild

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Pam (respa)
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-A lovely poem
about Gabrielle, jaybird.
-Effective rhyme and meter
that creates a smooth flow
for your poem.
-Its nice to hear about
young people who are creative,
and enjoy the arts.
-I wonder what she ending up choosing.
-Thanks for sharing.


 Comment Written 28-Jun-2019


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Dolly'sPoems
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You certainly lived to see her into adulthood and these words are a wonderful tribute to her, I hope she appreciates it, your words are oozing with pride here, much enjoyed, love Dolly x


 Comment Written 28-Jun-2019


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What a beautiful poem for a beautiful, talented girl. Is Gabrielle your granddaughter?
She sounds like a lovely person and you are right about her name.
Thanks for sharing.


 Comment Written 28-Jun-2019


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I'm sure Gabrielle cherishes your loving poem, Jay. I hope, now, after eight years of development, she has fulfilled all of your expectations.

Don
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 Comment Written 28-Jun-2019


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I smiled as I read you poem it remind off my grand-daughter she was in dancing school, the teacher said she was a natural for five years old
Madison learned very fast, then she move to far to travel so she makes up dances at home
I pray one day she starts dancing again for now that is one of her goals
Thank you for sharing this lovely write
cookie


 Comment Written 28-Jun-2019


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Excellent. I'll bet the little lady you speak of is your grand daughter. If you wrote this poem in 20ll, she must be a beauty now. Excellent poem.



 Comment Written 28-Jun-2019


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What a lovely tribute poem to a little girl who is, I would guess, your great granddaughter. You rhythm and rhyme obviously comes from your heart. and your love of life and people show thru in every verse. I'm glad you made it this far to prove your predictions correct, and I wish you many more years to enjoy her company!

All the Best!

Phil


 Comment Written 28-Jun-2019


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I'm happy to hear you lived to see her grow up. That is what I hope for most when I think about my daughter. It seems like a long time from now but I know its really not.


 Comment Written 28-Jun-2019


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This poem meets the standard you have set for yourself in verse, rhyme and meter. I saw in the author's notes that she is doing well at 21. I want to congratulate both of you.


 Comment Written 28-Jun-2019


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It looks like Evil Eddie has struck Jay,
You might want to do a quick edit : ))
She needs to cboose a form of art,
Apart from the little nit, a very good poem that I'm sure Gabrielle would be delighted to hear>


 Comment Written 28-Jun-2019


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