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The Music of Freedom


Different songs, same message.

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royowen
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Of course most countries have been set free from someone or other. If one would look at a map of the world a thousand years ago, one would see vastly changed borders, of course ours was wrested from the original inhabitants, as was yours. But a great array of 5/7/5s in this contest, skilfully scribed and a very worthy entry in this contest. Well done, blessings, Roy


 Comment Written 28-Jun-2019



reply by the author on 28-Jun-2019
    The music part, though, is universal. It is the component that ties us all together. Different songs, but the feelings they evoke is the same. Thank you for your nice review, Roy.

reply by royowen on 28-Jun-2019
    Most welcome
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Very well-written stacked 5-7-5's to celebrate the fourth of July and independence day when USA find their freedom a day becomes the land of the free.


 Comment Written 28-Jun-2019



reply by the author on 28-Jun-2019
    Yes, so true.
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Elizabeth Johnson1
 
 
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Very well done! I would have a hard time coming up with this type of poem! I admire the creativeness of the poem. You certainly met the challenge.
Thank you for sharing!


 Comment Written 28-Jun-2019



reply by the author on 28-Jun-2019
    Thank you for reviewing!
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Alcreator Litt Dear
 
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This poem has a good flow of thoughts, you have enjoyed the music and songs having the same message, you are a proud American to sing; enjoyed the read, well said, well done. Write-Inspire-Change --DR ALCREATOR

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 Comment Written 28-Jun-2019



reply by the author on 28-Jun-2019
    thanks
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Yeah, yeah, yeah~

The white colonists still colonizing today. They were slavers then, they send blacks to prison now.

Yeah, yeah, yeah--North America was for the British; it's for white folks now. We like immigrants only if they're from Europe.

Yeah, yeah, yeah--The original Americans continue to lose land and die from alcoholism today, no regard for their humanity.

I love America. But I only love what it is becoming! And I'll be grateful when we all have fought for our freedom and won. The past doesn't include our victories, it includes our losses.

I was going to give you four stars, but it wouldn't be fair to you cause this is a great poem, even if the content bothers me.

G-d will bless America when it is free for all.

Yuna.



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 Comment Written 28-Jun-2019



reply by the author on 28-Jun-2019
    Well, thank you for honoring the writing, itself, rather than the message with which you disagree, since it's the writing that is the purpose of this site.
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