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Fragments of a Coheded Soul


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Donna Armstrong
 
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Rating of Chapter 1 -
Cursed Wisdom
Great piece written by the Author, captured my full attention. This one reminded me of the series Roman and one of those King Arthur movies. Kept me in anticipation until the end.


 Comment Written 22-Feb-2007


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Rating of Chapter 4 -
The Scythe
Again-painted firm and deffinate picture in my head. Loved your poetry. Has deffiate potential. Are you a published poet? You should be. Keep it up.


 Comment Written 17-Apr-2004


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Ice Daggers
 
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Rating of Chapter 8 -
Mr. Balloon
A very tender piece and again very well portrayed. A very good depiciton of imagry to the child on a fateful day. I curtsy to you for your tact in this ode.


 Comment Written 06-Mar-2004


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Ice Daggers
 
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Rating of Chapter 7 -
Yesterday's Tears
This was an intriguing piece. The summation of life's angst. Well written and well portrayed. I am very glad I had stashed this book in my bookcase for a rainy day.


 Comment Written 06-Mar-2004


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Ice Daggers
 
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Rating of Chapter 6 -
Finity's End
Repititon of words hurt me on this one, especially mask, and the length was long, (duh statement). BUT, the message of this poem is so beautifully done. Let's see if I can surmise this correctly,,, on second thought. Just know that you wrote the essence of life in this poem for those not so grateful for the simpler pleasures that touch upon their lives and destroy all the factions that make it whole. I think I said what I meant.

Shut up Ice,,, GREAT poem James.


 Comment Written 06-Mar-2004


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Ice Daggers
 
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Rating of Chapter 5 -
Poker Face
The piece was enjoyable, I give it that, but doesn't seem to measure to the rest I have read in this collection. I am very pleased I am taking the time to read them though. I shoulda done it sooner. smiling.


 Comment Written 06-Mar-2004


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Ice Daggers
 
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Rating of Chapter 4 -
The Scythe
Rust, got you on this one. then the use of and to begin a line. Both deterrents for my liking. I did enjoy the essence of the poem and the message it portrayed. well done and captivating.


 Comment Written 06-Mar-2004


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Ice Daggers
 
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Rating of Chapter 3 -
The Hourglass
Very admirable piece, I too am a Poe fan. This was very well written and presented. It is difficult when one realizes the sands of time are not forever. Thank you for the reminder.


 Comment Written 06-Mar-2004


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Ice Daggers
 
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Rating of Chapter 2 -
Samael
This one will be an all time favorite of mine. I hate to say I admire the Angel of Death, but face it, the man definitely gets the shaft. Perhaps I should post one or two of mine relaying the same message. The poor guy.

I enjoyed the way you wrote this and relayed the message within it very clear.


 Comment Written 06-Mar-2004


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Ice Daggers
 
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Rating of Chapter 1 -
Cursed Wisdom
I am a great fan of Camelot, I love the era. Though I would have been busy baling water and not writing poetry. hmmmm....

I was terribly distracted by the lack of rhyme in a couple of stanzas but I am very pleased with the overall write of this piece. My duh for having had waited so long for taking the time to read it.


 Comment Written 06-Mar-2004


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