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The long run

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Colin John
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Hi and yes it's all what you say and we make our own destiny and it's going the wrong way , thanks for sharing kind regards Colin


 Comment Written 13-Jul-2019



reply by the author on 15-Jul-2019
    Yes indeed destiny is like a map we follow or, not.
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Yuna Akil
 
 
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Your poem shows a great attitude to have. The way your frame destiny allows you to have a certain kind of hope that allows us to keep going.

Thank you for your poem.

I like the alliteration, "widened words." I also like the metaphor "rides on the cool breeze." It is very settling.

Cheers!

Yuna.


 Comment Written 11-Jul-2019



reply by the author on 15-Jul-2019
    Made a mistake not widened words but wizened words.
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V.R.K
 
 
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Beautifully written! I love how vividly you described everything throughout the entire piece. Absolutely wonderful! Keep up the good work!

Best to you,
V.R.K


 Comment Written 11-Jul-2019



reply by the author on 15-Jul-2019
    Thanks for your great review.
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