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Jesus last words...5-7-5 form

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I think you absolutely did the right thing in using this picture. I am still moved to tears when I think of the horrible suffering, when I think of Jesus, the man (all to intercede for us, for our sins) going through what He did.

But He was resurrected, and in that and our redemption is incomparable joy. What a beautiful poem, Linda.


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    Hi Dawn, thank you so much beautiful angel...I am so glad you like it...like you....it bring tears when I think of how Jesus was treated...and still He loves us like no other...thank you for a wonderful review my sweet friend...God Bless...love you...Linda xxoo
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Hi, Linda. This is a very moving poem e ven though it be so small in text. It tells much of the story. The story of his crucifiction is so very hurtful especially when we realize why he allowed it to happen. Bod bless you my friend.XX Bob


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    Hi Bob, it is such a powerful story told...I was going to hold off until Easter...but it is something that should be remembered everyday...and the love should be returned...sigh...thank you my sweet friend for a wonderful review...God Bless you as well...love Linda xxoo

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    : ) Bob
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Hi, Linda. This is a very moving poem e ven though it be so small in text. It tells much of the story. The story of his crucifiction is so very hurtful especially when we realize why he allowed it to happen. Bod bless you my friend.XX Bob


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    thank you again...xxoo love Linda

reply by Mastery on 19-Jul-2019
    : ) X Bob
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Excellent. Your poem and picture paint a powerful message about our Lords final words. This is understandable and very sorrowful. You have done a fine job with this.


 Comment Written 17-Jul-2019



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    Hi Willie, thank you so much for a wonderful review...I am so glad you like it...love Linda xxoo
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A very moving write about the last hours of our Saviour. He was abused and degraded for our sins. But he accepted his fate with courage and peace.

But his work was not complete and never will be. Interesting to note that you refer to the drink given to complete his humiliation as sour wine. We were always told that he was given vinegar. Not that is much difference.
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 Comment Written 17-Jul-2019



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    Hi Freda, so good to see you my sweet friend...in our bible study class...in John: it states the there was a jar of sour wine...but I believe I have heard that it was sour vinegar as well...but as you said...not that it makes much difference...He died for us...and still loves us no matter what...thank you for a wonderful review...and big hugs to you...love Linda xxoo
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Hello Linda: Thank you, my dear, for reminding us about the sacrifice that Jesus and His almighty Father made for us long ago. It doesn't have to be Christmas or Easter to thank Him for what He did for us as you have done here with your strong words. It is the truth and it should be told more often and not just on holidays.

I have missed talking to you very much. We are getting rain from the hurricane today so I am inside all day for the first time in several weeks.

I hope you and your family are doing well. Get ready for a big heatwave coming through over the weekend.

Take care of yourself my old friend and drop me a line when you can...I really liked your poem...I'm sure it got a lot of readers attention...See ya...Bill


 Comment Written 17-Jul-2019



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    HI Bill, I was going to wait until Easter to put it on...but like you said...we should be thanking Him everyday...the way things are going in the world these days...people need to remember what Jesus did for us...and what God gave up...find love in their hearts...

    miss talking to you as well my sweet friend...and hope you and your family are doing well too...

    it is going to have heat indexs in the 100's here in Florida for a few days...even though it has been hot for awhile...and in Illinois it is going to get just as hot...so it doesn't mater where I am...it is going to be a hot one...LOL...so stay cool...

    thank you as always for a wonderful review you...and all your so lovely stars...you take care as well...and be safe..see you around sweet guy...thank you...love to you...Linda xxoo
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Wine is indeed sour, even the sweet ones have a lingering sour taste. I agree with the message of the poem, but I really am intrigued by the picture.
As always, thank you for sharing!
Gianina


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    HI Gianinas, thank you for a great review...and the picture told the story...you are always so very welcome my friend...love Linda xxoo
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Was the sour wine gifted on a spear-pierced sponce by a Roman soldier an example of of kindnes or the final taunt of a bully? we will never know for cerain. I have heard well-intentioned clergymen offer both those arguments.

It was the final contribution of humanity to the dying Christ whose work was finished so the theme of 'finished' is maintained in this 5-7-5.


 Comment Written 17-Jul-2019



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    HI Jim, so go to see you...I have heard it both ways as well...I hope for his sake it was from kindness...thank you for a wonderful review my friend...love Linda xxoo
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You deserve six, but I don't have any left. Sure wish I had
your talent. You can say so much with a few words.
Your faith shows through in your poetry. Thanks for sharing.


 Comment Written 17-Jul-2019



reply by the author on 17-Jul-2019
    Hi kleck, just the thought of your six stars is more than enough...and thank you for your kind word...you are so very welcome...thank you...love Linda xxoo

reply by kleck140 on 19-Jul-2019
    You are most Welcome!
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Hi Linda,

Wonderful tribute for Jesus. Excellent word economy as you have utilised each syllable so well. As you say, we must be grateful to Him for all he has done for us. Good luck in the contest.

Regards,
Anupam


 Comment Written 17-Jul-2019



reply by the author on 17-Jul-2019
    Hi Anupam, thank you so very much my friend for a great review...
    He died for us on the cross...and still loves us like no other...love Linda xxoo
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