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tanka (ordered from Amazon)


which one comes first

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Comment by
Raul1
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I think that the egg comes first and second the Hen. Funny and mysterious it sounds. I like how you structured this poem. No grammatical errors. Good luck in the contest!


 Comment Written 18-Jul-2019



reply by the author on 20-Jul-2019
    Thank you for your excellent review. I greatly appreciate it.

    Blessings
    Janet

reply by Raul1 on 20-Jul-2019
    You're welcome.
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That was clever, Janet. So, what did Amazon deliver first? The chicken or the egg? I love that cute picture, baby chickens really are cute, but like our children, they grow! Well done, my friend, and good luck in the contest. :)) Sandra xx


 Comment Written 18-Jul-2019



reply by the author on 20-Jul-2019
    Thank you Sandra for your excellent review. I greatly appreciate it.

    Blessings
    Janet
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the13thpoet
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Jmf good morning. First let me start by saying good luck in the contest. Though I have dabbled with different forms of poetry since I joined this site, Tanka is a form I have yet to try. Anyway I thought I would finally get the answer to this age old question......so what is the final answer?


 Comment Written 18-Jul-2019



reply by the author on 20-Jul-2019
    Thank you for your excellent review. I guess we will really never know - only speculate. :)))))

    Blessings
    Janet
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Hi, Janet. I am a bit confused on the "amazon" reference here though. ?? did you order and receive the egg or chick? I know I sound stupid asking, but I am still just curious. Please forgive my ignorance. Bless you. Bob


 Comment Written 18-Jul-2019



reply by the author on 20-Jul-2019
    Thank you Bob for your excellent review. I was really just having a bit of fun with this one. :)))))

    Blessings my friend
    Janet

reply by Mastery on 20-Jul-2019
    : ) Bob

reply by Mastery on 20-Jul-2019
    : ) Bob
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Hi, Janet. I am a bit confused on the "amazon" reference here though. ?? did you order and receive the egg or chick? I know I sound stupid asking, but I am still just curious. Please forgive my ignorance. Bless you. Bob


 Comment Written 18-Jul-2019



reply by the author on 20-Jul-2019
    Thank you Bob for your excellent review. I always appreciate hearing from you.

    Blessings
    Janet

reply by Mastery on 20-Jul-2019
    : ) Bob
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This is very sweet write and I like it. It poses the same old question without the question the answer said to be final..not very. You get anything from Amazon.

Still the question may bounce back again sometimes, you never know.
Very original write though, tastes a bit of the japanese.

Benny


 Comment Written 18-Jul-2019



reply by the author on 20-Jul-2019
    Thank you Benny for your excellent review. I greatly appreciate it.

    Blessings
    Janet
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I'd be interested to know which came first, the chicken or the egg. This was an ingenious poem that was amusing and brought a smile to me az I read it.


 Comment Written 18-Jul-2019



reply by the author on 20-Jul-2019
    Thank you Earl for your excellent review. I greatly appreciate it.

    Blessings
    Janet
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This is a really cute Tanka poem you have penned about which comes first - the chicken or the egg? You used very cute imagery with the picture of the little chicks. Best wishes in the contest my friend! Blessings, Teri


 Comment Written 17-Jul-2019



reply by the author on 20-Jul-2019
    Thank you Teri for your excellent review. I greatly appreciate it.

    Blessings
    Janet
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That is just so mean. After centuries of agonizing over this very important issue, you leave the unfortunate reader hanging.

Great work withing the confines of the Tanka. Best of luck in the contest with this one

hugs

Freda


 Comment Written 17-Jul-2019



reply by the author on 20-Jul-2019
    Thank you Freda for your excellent review. I greatly appreciate it.

    Blessings
    Janet
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With Amazon's reputation, they'll arrive at the same time. Same day delivery of course! Intriguing subject, and one that gets great debate. We'll leave it to Amazon to resolve the question. Great idea for your Tanks, and best of luck in the contest. Maybe the topic is catching. I wrote about geese! Very enjoyable, and those chicks are so sweet. My parents always ordered baby chicks for spring, but they didn't stay cute very long. judi


 Comment Written 17-Jul-2019



reply by the author on 20-Jul-2019
    Thank you Judi for your excellent review. My family always ordered baby chicks for Easter. My sister and I always wondered what happened to them. When they started to get bigger - they just disappeared.
    Blessings
    Janet

reply by judiverse on 20-Jul-2019
    You're very welcome. judi
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