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Olympiad-2012


Great job England

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C. Gale Burnett
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JayBird, dear sir, this is really good.
I totally loved the 8 syllable verses and your exceptional rhyme.
No artwork was needed ... your poem that expressive.
Perfect title creation.
Thank you for the larger font :)
Loved the third stanza and the ending couplet.
Awesome!!!
Blessings,
Gale



 Comment Written 23-Jul-2019


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duchessofdrumborg
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"Olympiad 2012" , is an extremely well-written and justifiably patriotic piece. This talented poet's work was a privilege to both read and review. To me, this is a six, but unfortunately I'm never given enough of them! I look forward to seeing your next post.


 Comment Written 23-Jul-2019


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Maria Jose Garcia
 
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Another wonderful poem.
It seems sports have the power to join different peoples. This was the case of the London Olympics.
Thanks so much for sharing.


 Comment Written 23-Jul-2019


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What a wonderfully crafted piece you have delivered for your reviewing audience, my friend. I especially enjoyed the rhythm and flow of it all.
God bless
Steve


 Comment Written 23-Jul-2019


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This is a delightful story in a poem about the London Olympics. I found it very atmospheric and uplifting. I was right there with you. Great writing. All the best. Jen


 Comment Written 23-Jul-2019


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It certainly is appropriate to craft a sonnet about England. Very enjoyable as always with your rhythm and easy way of story telling-a pleasure to read!

All the Best!
Phil


 Comment Written 22-Jul-2019


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Joy Graham
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Hello Jaybird,

I enjoyed reading your Olympic themed poem today :) It gets me in the spirit for the next one. Summer in Japan I believe. It will be fun to watch and witness all the new records they will set. I wonder who will be the darling that the fans fall in love with this time?

Joy xx


 Comment Written 22-Jul-2019


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Thank you for reminding us about the glory of the 2012 Olympic games. Here in the Los Angeles area, we are preparing for 2028--I hope we approach England's success! I enjoyed your rhymed sonnet as a fitting tribute. Cheers- Joan
P.S. With a pen name like JAYBIRD1, you might enjoy my "Feathered Neighbors" post. It somehow got out of sequence in my portfolio.


 Comment Written 22-Jul-2019


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This poem I like because of the storytelling. It is very easy to read and understand. I know that poems are hard to write, but you did it well. No grammatical errors.


 Comment Written 22-Jul-2019


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Hello Jaybird1
I read your rhyming poem about the great job England did in England with the Olympic games in 2012.
Very written telling us how England did so well to win the Gold metal even if there was the threat of terrorism .
Gert


 Comment Written 22-Jul-2019


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