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It's strange to think I have to write more words down in order to send this review. More words than six but I have done it now and I loved your poem and I await for the next posting :-) ~DD


 Comment Written 03-Aug-2019



reply by the author on 03-Aug-2019
    Hi DD. Yes, these short ones are a pain, aren't they? Takes more effort to write the review than to read it. :) Marilyn
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Great memoir in just six words. It sounds really upbeat like she's going out with a smile on her face, no regrets and a question we don't know the answer to until?
Well thought out Marilyn,
cheers,
valda


 Comment Written 30-Jul-2019



reply by the author on 30-Jul-2019
    Hi Valda. Thank you for your nice review. Marilyn
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This is a really interesting contest Marlyn, not a lot one can do with a six word contest, but I think you've done very well my friend, good job Marilyn, blessings, Roy


 Comment Written 30-Jul-2019



reply by the author on 30-Jul-2019
    Hi Roy. Thank you for your nice review of this one. It's hard to write a 6-word anything, but this is a 6-word memoir for Maria's club. This about sums it up for me. Marilyn

reply by royowen on 30-Jul-2019
    Well done
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Love this!!
Your simplicity eloquently
says it all in six little words!
I love the 'What's next?'
That is so me, ha ha.
Have a great week,
Blessings...


 Comment Written 29-Jul-2019



reply by the author on 30-Jul-2019
    Hi Judy. Thank you for reading and review this one. Marilyn

reply by Irish Rain on 30-Jul-2019
    You're welcome!!
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And gosh, how everybody can understand a Things To Do List. You summed it up too nicely. I personally, can procrastinate on a list. But you're so happy.

Good consonance from done-loved. Good repeat with it. Great enthusiasm. Good luck in the contest.


 Comment Written 29-Jul-2019



reply by the author on 29-Jul-2019
    Hi Alicia. Thank you for your review of this 6-word memoir for Maria's flash fiction club. :) Marilyn
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Holy smokes. I still can't get over this challenge -- a memoir to be written in only six words. You did it though, and kudos because it's not exactly easy, I imagine. (Makes me want to try it. LOL)


 Comment Written 28-Jul-2019



reply by the author on 29-Jul-2019
    Hi Dawn. Thank you for reading this. It was fun because the challenge to condense to six words was pretty intense. Marilyn

reply by Ideasaregems-Dawn on 30-Jul-2019
    I bet. You're very welcome.
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I can't imagine summarizing one's life any more succinctly than this six-worder. What a delightful position to be in at this point in your life, still looking forward to the next adventure while thoroughly appreciating those past. Rod


 Comment Written 28-Jul-2019



reply by the author on 29-Jul-2019
    Hi Rod. Thank you very much for your positive review of my 6-word memoir. Marilyn

reply by RodG on 29-Jul-2019
    Always a pleasure. Rod
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Did it also - Loved it too - glad to hear you're anticipating what's next. It's the way to keep going I believe. Anticipation of the next step. Not to worry about it (fretting comes quickly to me) - but eager to see what God has in mind for us.
Excellent job on this short bit.


 Comment Written 28-Jul-2019



reply by the author on 29-Jul-2019
    Hi Gail. Thank you for your nice review of this 6-word memoir. Marilyn
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Hello Marilyn, LOL - very good! You came up with a good idea. Not easy to think of a message with so few words - you've done really well. Concise and to the point - well done and good illustration. Regards Dorothy x


 Comment Written 28-Jul-2019



reply by the author on 29-Jul-2019
    Hi Dorothy. Thank you for your review of this challenge. Marilyn
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HI Marilyn, sounds just like me...Done it...loved it...and what's next...what's my next step???...LOL...very well written my sweet friend...love your poem...and I resemble this picture...love you sweet girl...Linda xxoo


 Comment Written 27-Jul-2019



reply by the author on 29-Jul-2019
    Hi Linda. Thank you so much for your super review. It is exciting to find out what each day has in store for us and be grateful for it. Marilyn

reply by l.raven on 29-Jul-2019
    your so welcome Marilyn...and so very right...I am at my daughters now in Florida...everyday we do something new...where do they get all this energy???...LOL...love xxoo
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