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100 words flash fiction.

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This is a really clever post! You tell it in first person and we don't know until the end that it's "she" unicorn. I hope it's a "he" also. Both are needed to have more unicorns.


 Comment Written 27-Sep-2020



reply by the author on 28-Sep-2020
    Thank you so much Helen for reading, reviewing and your great comments. I agree that both are needed for more unicorns.
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How I would like to meet a magical animal. It would be a cat. What would my cat of magic look like. Magical coat, that could be fluffy or sleek, black, white, golden or brindle. Grey eyes, of smouldering passion or snappy black with flashing rage. Ah, my cat of magic how lovely would he be.
I am not just handing out 6's because you are my sister Alie, your wonderful writing has a hand in earning them as well. LOL Love U Anne


 Comment Written 03-Aug-2019



reply by the author on 03-Aug-2019
    Aww that is so sweet that I have earned a 6er Anne, thank you for reviewing, I really liked your description of your magical cat, it would be beautiful. Luv u Alie
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What a cute story, Aryr.
I do believe in magical creatures and unicorns are my favorites together with fairies.
Your last paragraph is great.
Thanks so much for taking part in this event.


 Comment Written 30-Jul-2019



reply by the author on 30-Jul-2019
    Thank you again Maria for reviewing and your kind comments.
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This is a delightful little story of the lone unicorn who spies another. What a miracle, what a joy! I hope for her sake it's a "he," too. Great job on your flash fiction. Marilyn


 Comment Written 29-Jul-2019



reply by the author on 30-Jul-2019
    Thank Marilyn for reviewing and I appreciate your great comments.
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Beautiful entry for 100 words flash fiction. In the stillness of our heart beating time with nature, we can imagine and sometimes see the other world of faeries, unicorns and many other creatures that exist in a parallel universe. We need to 'take the time to touch the morning." Well done my friend XXK.


 Comment Written 29-Jul-2019



reply by the author on 29-Jul-2019
    Thank you so much for reviewing Kace, I appreciate both your kind comments and that you are a believer.
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I do hope she found her mate! Perhaps if we just clap our hands and believe in unicorn magic? No, they'd be hunted for their magical horns . . .
See, you've caught my imagination. Thanks for the story!


 Comment Written 28-Jul-2019



reply by the author on 28-Jul-2019
    Thank you Darlene for reviewing. Ahaaa and what a great imagination you have.

reply by Darlene Franklin on 28-Jul-2019
    You're most welcome.
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The day the world stops in believing in something other than themselves is the day the world will end. Alie, I believe, just because we cannot see into the mythical world of fairies and all does not mean they do not exist. This is a good 100 Words Flash Fiction.


 Comment Written 28-Jul-2019



reply by the author on 28-Jul-2019
    Thank you for your kind words and beliefs Jose.
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This is a veritable epic compared with your previous post.

Do not weep for the poor unicorn. Beliefe in the fantastic may be dwindling but this beast is enjoying a surge of new belief and here's why:

From dictionary.com part of the definition of 'unicorn'.
Finance. a relatively new company, usually less than ten years old, that is valued at $1 billion or more by public or private investors.


 Comment Written 28-Jul-2019



reply by the author on 28-Jul-2019
    Wow, that is amazing and really appreciated.
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Seem I remember reading somewhere that Unicorns were gender-neutral that is why they were not on the ark, As long as some child has imagination the magical creatures will exist. Even if it is the child hidden in all adults.
Rikki:)


 Comment Written 27-Jul-2019



reply by the author on 28-Jul-2019
    Definitely a great way of thinking. I do believe we all have that hidden child (smile).

reply by Rikki66 on 28-Jul-2019
    So true!
    Rikki:)
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I believe, I believe, I believe . . .
I like the affirmation that the fantasy creatures are still here and those who believe may still see them.
I hope the unicorn gets her wish and finds herself with a "he" so they can bring us more unicorns.

Excellent first person account from the unicorn's POV, reflecting both her sadness at being the last of her kind and the hope that perhaps she is not.


 Comment Written 27-Jul-2019



reply by the author on 28-Jul-2019
    Thank you so much for your kind words, very much appreciated and I am glad you are a believer.
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