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Crepuscule

obscure word 7-9-7 poem

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dejohnsrld (Debbie)

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This is definitely an obscure word, my friend. Wherever did you find it. I enjoyed your 5-7-5 and wish you the best in the contest~Debbie

Comment Written 04-Aug-2019

reply by the author on 05-Aug-2019

Thank you .Iwas checking the synonyms for twilight and i saw this.

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Y. M. Roger

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I had honestly heard of this word used one other time....in a lit class waaaay back in high school, but I had forgotten what it meant: thanx for the reminder!! :) Thank you for joining in our obscure fun and you be sure to enjoy the rest of your weekend! ;) Y.M.

Comment Written 03-Aug-2019

reply by the author on 05-Aug-2019

Thank you very much

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judester

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Well I learned a new word today, though I may have to practice the pronunciation a few times ha ha. A good entry for the contest, see you at the finish line cheers, judester

Comment Written 01-Aug-2019

reply by the author on 05-Aug-2019

Thank you very much.

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You captured my attention more then one , I love the artwork you choose and, the mixture of them hues set the mood your words are few yet like a small fist it can land a had punch. Thanks you for sharing
cookie

Comment Written 01-Aug-2019

reply by the author on 05-Aug-2019

Thank you very much .

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Gert sherwood

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Hello author your obscure word 7-9-7 poem
"Crepuscule"
Obscure Word 7-9-7 writing prompt entry
I like it cause it is well described where I could clearly picture that-

When the sun says goodbye and
the sky sighs in red gold CREPUSCULE
we call it dusk or twilight.

Comment Written 31-Jul-2019

reply by the author on 05-Aug-2019

Thank you very much.

reply by Gert sherwood on 05-Aug-2019

You are welcome, I hope to see more of your writings
Gert

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Sallyo

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I am Australian.

Therefore, I write like an Australian.

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As soon as I saw your title I thought of the rose of that name that my sister grows. I've always thought it an ugly word for a rose OR twilight, but you've made a grand job of including and describing it in this three-liner.

Comment Written 31-Jul-2019

reply by the author on 05-Aug-2019

Thank you very much. True. It sounds ugly

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CrystieCookie999

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Cool use of "crepuscule." I am thinking it would be punny to use it with "corpuscle" somewhere else. Thanks for resurrecting a word that might only exist in science textbooks! Nice photo choice, and personification, too!

Comment Written 31-Jul-2019

reply by the author on 05-Aug-2019

Thank you very much.

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Spangle

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I really enjoyed reading this because it poetically describes a word that's new to me regarding what I refer to as 'my favorite sky moments'. I love witnessing the sky's many offerings of beauty. Best wishes in the contest!

Comment Written 31-Jul-2019

reply by the author on 05-Aug-2019

Thank you very much for these lovely comments and the glittering stars. much appreciated.

reply by Spangle on 05-Aug-2019

You're very welcome!

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evesayshi

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In my opinion, good one! This is not a word with which I was familiar, until your poem, which is exactly what the prompt required, so it is fully compliant, and I wish you good luck in the contest, despite my own entry...

Comment Written 31-Jul-2019

reply by the author on 05-Aug-2019

Thank you very much.

reply by evesayshi on 05-Aug-2019

You are very welcome, Sanku...Eve

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robyn corum

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Dear Mystery Poet,

Isn't that new and different? I don't think I've ever heard that word - though it's similar to 'corpuscle' when you first see it and I had - mistakenly - thought they might have something to do with each other. Silly me.

This was fun. Thanks so much! Good luck!

Comment Written 31-Jul-2019

reply by the author on 05-Aug-2019

Thank you very much. everyone has heard of corpuscle but not crepuscule . and every one is surprised seeing the meaning .somehow it does not suit !

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