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Crepuscule


obscure word 7-9-7 poem

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An interesting challenge and one as far as I can tell you have pulled off very nicely. i have never until now heard of CREPUSCULE and the F.S spelling program doesn't seem to recognize it either and highlights it as a miss-spelling. Yet I now know it is not... A Very cool poem for the prompt, good luck!


 Comment Written 31-Jul-2019



reply by the author on 05-Aug-2019
    Dictionary will show the word .once I was checking the synonyms for twilight, I came across this word.it is a mouthful.
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Oh wow, a very interesting poem. I don't think I've ever heard that word before, but it seems to fit in the poem nicely and it flows well. Might be useful to put what the word means in the notes too.


 Comment Written 31-Jul-2019



reply by the author on 05-Aug-2019
    thank you very much.
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I've never heard of that word...kind of sounds like it should be in a horror movie. I like learning new words though, so thank you for this one. I wish you luck in the conrest.


 Comment Written 31-Jul-2019



reply by the author on 05-Aug-2019
    Thankyou very much.
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Your poem has certainly utilised an unusual word and you have explained it well. But it is such an ugly word: it sounds like some poxy pustules of disease, so I doubt I would ever use it myself!


 Comment Written 31-Jul-2019



reply by the author on 05-Aug-2019
    Thank you very much.so true .Iwas checking the synonyms for twilight and I came across this one.it does sound poxy and hence unsuitable for such a beautiful phenomenon

reply by LisaMay on 05-Aug-2019
    It's interesting how some words just don't sound like the phenomena they describe. Twilight is a beautiful time of day.
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That is a word rarely heard, and you have used it very well in this short poem with beautiful artwork, very well written and presented, best wishes for your contest****kahpot


 Comment Written 30-Jul-2019



reply by the author on 05-Aug-2019
    Thank you very much.
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What the hell is a Crepuscule? Is it anything like a creamsicle?

This is very good. It makes a great contest submission and should do very well in the voting booth. Contests on FanStory are difficult to win, but you may do it.




 Comment Written 30-Jul-2019



reply by the author on 05-Aug-2019
    twilight. I came across the word when i was looking up the synonyms for twilight .Thank you very much for stopping by.
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Nice choice of obscure word. I like how you define it in the poem. I think that those who can't do that should give the definition in the notes
The artwork is a good choice.
Good luck and keep writing
dragonpoet


 Comment Written 30-Jul-2019



reply by the author on 05-Aug-2019
    Thankyou very much.

reply by dragonpoet on 05-Aug-2019
    You are most kindly welcome.
    dp
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Janice Canerdy
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This is a very well-written 7-9-7 that stands alone, giving full definition within--not requiring author notes to explain. I had seen the word before but was WAY off on what it means!


 Comment Written 30-Jul-2019



reply by the author on 05-Aug-2019
    Thank you very much.
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Good job with this contest prompt. Now I have to look up that word. I'll make a guess first and say it has something to do with the gorgeous color at dusk. ? Ok I'll look it up.


 Comment Written 30-Jul-2019



reply by the author on 05-Aug-2019
    yes it means twilight .Thank you very much
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I learned a new word today. Thank you! I had to look up crepuscule. I also like the word eventide. Your poem fit the requirements perfectly as does your picture. Good show!


 Comment Written 30-Jul-2019



reply by the author on 05-Aug-2019
    Thank you very much once again for these glittering stars.

reply by celtic52 on 08-Aug-2019
    you are welcome!
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