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Crepuscule


obscure word 7-9-7 poem

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I enjoyed your contest entry, Mystery Author. You did a great job with the prompt. The art is outstanding and perfect for your well-chosen words. I know what this word means, but many may not. Perhaps you could add a small definition in notes. Good job and tanks for sharing. Jan


 Comment Written 30-Jul-2019


reply by the author on 05-Aug-2019
    thank you very much.i have added the meaning in the notes.
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I'm pretty sure we'd recognize crepuscule as the obscure word--even without the caps. We also call that particular evening sky 'sailor's delight'. Great presentation.
I wish you the best of luck at the polls.


Peace, Lee


 Comment Written 30-Jul-2019


reply by the author on 05-Aug-2019
    Thank you very much.
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Crepuscule, the state in rightly and meaningfully described in words, is put in visualization; well said, well done. Liked and enjoyed the read. Write-Inspire --DR ALCREATOR


 Comment Written 30-Jul-2019


reply by the author on 05-Aug-2019
    Thank you very much.
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-Nice image
and presentation.
-The syllable count is good.
-Effective use of one
continuous thought.
-The imagery and
personification add to
the description about the word,
especially "red gold."
-Good concluding line, too.
-Good luck in the contest.


 Comment Written 30-Jul-2019


reply by the author on 05-Aug-2019
    Thank you very much.

reply by Pam (respa) on 05-Aug-2019
    You are very welcome.
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fm wright
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Crepuscule is indeed a wonderful word in that it it expresses such beauty as such your other words help create! It is a wonderfully written poem and I wouldn't change one word of it. Also, you have chosen a beautiful picture to go with it and I wish you the very best with this entry!


 Comment Written 30-Jul-2019


reply by the author on 05-Aug-2019
    Thank you very much for these glittering stars and i am quite honoured that you like it.

reply by fm wright on 05-Aug-2019
    You are most welcome!
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A very well-written 7-9-7 poem about the beautiful sunset that end up inot a sky of red and gold crepuscule. A show of Twilight at the time of dusk.

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 Comment Written 30-Jul-2019


reply by the author on 05-Aug-2019
    Thank you very much.
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Mark D. R.
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A fine use of an unusual word to fit your verse and illustration! No problem with your caps note, but do increasing your font size. IMHO, it makes for a better FS presentation. Centering lines for your short verse is within your poetic choice.

Best wishes in the contest.

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 Comment Written 30-Jul-2019


reply by the author on 05-Aug-2019
    Thank you very much. I am not very computer savvy and i type these words straight into the space in the site.
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