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A poetic poem which says much about life. So real and to the point....when we write poems we can express how we feel in a few lines. Nice job. I like reading your poetry.


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An insightful commentary on life and how to live simply and stress free. There's always another day, but it's today that matters. Very well stated. ...ec


 Comment Written 06-Aug-2019


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Excellent thought, Jay. Who needs all that greed, hate and envy when there are so many better things to focus on.

As always, it is a pleasure to read your fine work. Hope you are doing well. :)

Gloria


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I liked the way you said you will take greed and hate send them on their way..you will save fear sorrow and grief for another .this moment is only for piece...Thanks for sharing.


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I like rhyming poems and this one rhymed well. To answer your question yes this does apply to me. I think once we figure out who we are then life is that much easier. I hope your peace and joy continue.


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I like rhyming poetry and this was nice to read. I hope that the joy and happiness continued into the present. I didn't seem to find any grammatical errors. Best wishes!


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The ability and willingness to accept and face the truth of who you truly are takes strength and courage. Some truths can be hard to face and admitting to our faults fully and honestly can be a daunting task. Inorder to grow, we must be willing to do it. If you have mastered this difficult task, you are powerful.


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Love the air of positive thinking! I think I would just put a simple semi-colon after the word "lifted" in the second to last line, and that's all to fix. Thank you for posting!


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You were 35? How wonderful to have had these many years to be the positive thinker you are. And a lifetime of enjoying and writing poetry - how rewarding.
This is an enjoyable place to write and "talk" with folks, don't you think?
And read their works and be read.
Thank you for sharing your latest!
Katharine - pome lover


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Such a lovely poem you have given us. We can simply worry ourselves to death. My favorite line is your last regarding peace and joy. While difficult, we have to look for it every single day, even in the smallest of things. I oftentimes find this a struggle, but life will pass us by, if not.
Great job with this short, lovely poem.
Wendy


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