Romance Poetry and love have been synonymous since poetry was first invented. Your acrostic poem should relate to this subject. An acrostic is a poem which spells out a word or idea. Sometimes what it spells out is the the title of the poem itself. Usually the first letter of each line spells out this key word.
I love your philosophy here and when we fill our thoughts with positive memories we make our life so much happier, leave all the negative thoughts outside your door! I do this all the time, life is about being happy, a joy to read,love Dolly x
Your poem, written so long ago, still has words of wisdom. I can never see where agreed, envy and hate ever made anyone's life better. And, I don't believe anyone gets out of this life without some fear, grief and sorrow. It's how you deal with them that makes all the difference. Best wishes.
Wow! Jay you wrote this when you were much younger, I see. How did you get so wise so early in life, my friend? Good job on this one as usual. There is a lot of good advice between ansd in trhe lines, my friend. Bless you. : ) Bob
-I appreciate your note, jaybird.
-You wrote a good poem
about it, too.
-The rhyme and message
-I like the first two lines
of verse two, and how you
will save other emotions
for another time.
-I am glad to hear
"peace and joy are here to stay."
-Thanks for sharing.
A very well-written poem about the facts of life that we must choose carefully what we want. If we embrace hatred and envy the sadNess and griefor will be part of your life and we won't find peace or joy.
"Facts Of Life", is an extremely well-written and deftly descriptive piece. This talented poet's work was a pleasure to both read and review. To me, this is a six, but unfortunately I only have fives left. I look forward to seeing your next post.