A very well-written love poem for a wife who is helping a friend to get her cancer treatment and have to leave her home and husband behind for a while and the husband realizing how much he misses his wife.
This is a loving and romantic write filled with passion, I am so sorry to read in your notes your wife is ill, she will soon be home with you, good luck with the contest Steve, your words are warm and caring, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
This poem speaks in different versions the same thing that you love your wife and promise you will continue loving her, hoping for good times; well said, well done. Liked and enjoyed the read. Keep Writing, Inspiring, Changing
Very moving poem! I love all the very tender and sincere feelings you express in it. I think there's a typo : "than" instead of "then" line 13. The only comment I would make is that maybe your talk of storms is a bit redundant (especially the second time that's right after the first). However, it's a great poem that made me want to be besides my loved one! Great job!
Comment Written 04-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 04-Aug-2019
I have not made that mistake in a long time. It is now fixed Thank you God Bless