Contact Us | En español    
         Join today or login

Status

New Here?
Sign Up
Fast! Three Questions.

Already a member?
Login

Contests

100 Word Flash Fiction
Deadline: Tomorrow!

Haiku Poetry Contest
Deadline: In 5 Days

ABC Poetry Contest
Deadline: Mar 9th

6 Word Poetry
Deadline: Mar 13th

Cinquain Poetry
Deadline: Mar 16th


Writing Classes

0 classes available. Click here locate a class and to learn more.

Rank

Poet: None
Author: None
Novel: None
Reviewer:None
Votes: None






Reviews from
Senryu (dreadful foggy eve)


Senryu contest entry

  19 total reviews 
Comment by
Susan Larson
Premier Author
 
Poet Rating
  Rank:  104 (+6)
Author Rating For Short Works
  Rank:  10
Script Rating
 
Review Stars
  Rank:  37
 

#10 Ranked Author
Excellent
Not yet exceptional. When the exceptional rating is reached this is highlighted
This is funny, but in my case it was never the in-laws. It was my own mother. In fact, I didn't even invite her to my 50 birthday party because I didn't want her embarrassing me in front of my friends.


 Comment Written 15-Sep-2019



reply by the author on 15-Sep-2019
    Awe! Sorry to hear that. Thank you for another great review.
    God bless
    Steve

reply by Susan Larson on 15-Sep-2019
    Well, actually, my husband had the in-law problem ; )

reply by the author on 15-Sep-2019
    LOL! Right.
Comment by
Joan E.
Premier Author
 
Poet Rating
  Rank:  51
Author Rating For Short Works
 
Author Rating For Novels
 
Review Stars
  
 Rank:  17
 
Excellent
Not yet exceptional. When the exceptional rating is reached this is highlighted
I regret the delay in responding, but the Baltic cruise ship had an unstable internet signal. Just got back home and have lots of catching up to do.

You selected the perfect picture and I did not expect the conclusion. Best wishes in the senryu contest- Joan


 Comment Written 15-Aug-2019



reply by the author on 15-Aug-2019
    No worries, thank you for the awesome review.
    God bless
    Steve
Comment by
kiwigirl2821
Premier Author
Premier Reader
 
Poet Rating
  Rank:  58
Author Rating For Short Works
 
Author Rating For Novels
 
Script Rating
 
Review Stars
  Rank:  114
 
Excellent
Not yet exceptional. When the exceptional rating is reached this is highlighted
A great little write and congrats on the second place win. My father in law wasn't bad but oh that mama! She was tiny but, oh so direct and powerful. I love the Senryu format and think you did a marvelous job! xoxo Kiwi


 Comment Written 12-Aug-2019



reply by the author on 13-Aug-2019
    Thank you. Mine was a real beast lol.
Comment by
BeasPeas
Premier Author
Premier Reader
 
Poet Rating
  Rank:  39
Author Rating For Short Works
 
Author Rating For Novels
 
Review Stars
  Rank:  13
 
Excellent
Not yet exceptional. When the exceptional rating is reached this is highlighted
Oh, this is SO humorous. I'm sure many will identify with your senryu. The image combined with the words is great. Best of luck in the contest with this fine entry. Marilyn


 Comment Written 08-Aug-2019



reply by the author on 08-Aug-2019
    LOL! Thank you for the awesome review.
Comment by
duchessofdrumborg
An iron fist in a velvet glove
Sharpen your quill every day!
 
Poet Rating
 
Author Rating For Short Works
 
Author Rating For Novels
 
Review Stars
  Rank:  84
 
Excellent
Not yet exceptional. When the exceptional rating is reached this is highlighted
Senryu (dreadful foggy eve), is short, succinct and very much much to the point. With a minimum of words, this talented poet has told it as it is. You KEEP WRITING and I'll KEEP READING. I look forward to seeing your next post.


 Comment Written 08-Aug-2019



reply by the author on 08-Aug-2019
    Thank you for the awesome review, my friend.
    God bless
    Steve
Comment by
Nike23
Premier Author
Premier Reader
 
Poet Rating
 
Author Rating For Short Works
 
 
Excellent
Not yet exceptional. When the exceptional rating is reached this is highlighted
I like this poem. Your poem adheres to the rules of a Senryu poem. Your poem is very funny. I don't have in-laws but I hope when I do they won't summon terror. Good choice of words. Good Job.


 Comment Written 07-Aug-2019



reply by the author on 08-Aug-2019
    LOL! Thank you for the awesome review.
    God bless
    Steve
Comment by
Gail Denham
Premier Author
 
Poet Rating
  Rank:  88 (+1)
Author Rating For Short Works
 
Review Stars
  Rank:  28
 
Excellent
Not yet exceptional. When the exceptional rating is reached this is highlighted
Oh my - I do hope the mom/law doesn't present that kind of picture to you. As I'm a mother/law four times over, I do not wish to be dreaded. However, your poem is funny and I like it.


 Comment Written 07-Aug-2019



reply by the author on 08-Aug-2019
    I'm sure you are a great one, mine was not.
    God bless
    Steve
Comment by
A. Willow Bends
Premier Author
Wendy
 
Poet Rating
  Rank:  125 (+1)
Author Rating For Short Works
 
Review Stars
  Rank:  160
 
Excellent
Not yet exceptional. When the exceptional rating is reached this is highlighted
Wish I had a six! Hilarious. This is phenomenal. I love the sense of humor conveyed in this short little piece. You condensed this so well. I laughed out loud! Great photo choice. Good luck!
Wendy


 Comment Written 07-Aug-2019



reply by the author on 07-Aug-2019
    Thank you for the awesome review, I had a lot of fun with it.
    God bless
    Steve
Comment by
M Milles
Premier Author
 
Poet Rating
  Rank:  369
Author Rating For Short Works
 
 
Excellent
Not yet exceptional. When the exceptional rating is reached this is highlighted
This is hilarious! The photo is creepy. I hope the in-laws, aren't. Nicely written Senryu. I found no grammatical errors. Good luck writing again and with the in-laws;)


 Comment Written 07-Aug-2019



reply by the author on 07-Aug-2019
    I had fun with this one, the pic was a perk.
    God bless
    Steve
Comment by
Ogden
Premier Author
 
Poet Rating
  Rank:  129
Author Rating For Short Works
  Rank:  66
Script Rating
 
Review Stars
  Rank:  79
 
Excellent
Not yet exceptional. When the exceptional rating is reached this is highlighted
I love that satori,Neonewman!
The illustration, too, especially if that fishwife is the wife of your father-in-law.
I hope you fared well in the contest.
Don


 Comment Written 07-Aug-2019



reply by the author on 07-Aug-2019
    Thank you, Don, for the awesome review. My ex-mother in law was a beast. So I was lucky to find a pic that would come close to her lol.
  -1-  2  Next Page 


Market your book.
Advertising options.
A Beauty's Form
A Bellean Sonnet (read notes)


Share or Bookmark
  Contact Us | En español | Advertise With Us

© 2015 FanStory.com, Inc. All Rights Reserved. Terms under which this service is provided to you. Privacy