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Your Sandals


Walking in Your Shoes

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tempeste
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Ciao Mystery poet. I gave you your 6th vote.

There were a couple of interesting entries but yours in the end ?won me over for its originality.

I like how you spoke of Jesus and his three year mission preaching the word of God ..going from town to town by foot ....a difficult and dangerous journey.

Your poem is a beautiful testimony of YOUR love and devotion for God and his teachings which you have chosen to live by ...may your example be of inspiration to others.






 Comment Written 07-Aug-2019



reply by the author on 07-Aug-2019
    Thank you so much, tempeste!!!

reply by tempeste on 10-Aug-2019
    I had no idea you wrote this lovely poem ... A podium win of a fan is sweeter .( smile )

    Take care and I hope you have a peaceful weekend.
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C. Gale Burnett
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This is by far a beautiful, meaningful poem about the sandals of Christ and stepping into His shoes to carry the cross that He bore, serving and teaching others about the love of God extended through us to others.
Excellent rhyme, beautiful font, gorgeous artwork.
Your poem is exceptional, each and every stanza. Thank you ever so much for sharing.
Very, very best wishes in the contest!


 Comment Written 06-Aug-2019



reply by the author on 07-Aug-2019
    Thank you Gale.
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Janice Canerdy
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What a WONDERFUL poem! This is a lovely praise of the Savior who walked
this Earth in humble fashion--in sandals--doing the Father's will. The metrical pattern in this poem was well-chosen. Delightful


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reply by the author on 06-Aug-2019
    Thank you so much, Janice!!
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A very well-written poem about the sandals Jesus wore when He walked on the earth, preaching and taught lessons to everyone who wants to hear. I wonder how long will we be able to wear His sandals?


 Comment Written 06-Aug-2019



reply by the author on 06-Aug-2019
    Thank you.
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I like how you lay out the ways you'll walk in Jesus' shoes: you'll press on ahead, carry the cross, lay down pride-not an easy road you've chosen. Well done, servant of t he most high God!


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    Thank you.
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This is an exceptional response to the prompt. It is perfect that you chose Jesus's shoes as your topic. He walked in the shoes of mankind. Now we are to walk in his shoes. That's just plain good.
This should definitely do well in the contest.


 Comment Written 06-Aug-2019



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    Thank you.
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Mystic Angel 7777
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This meets the contest requirements splendidly as you deliver a lovely perspective on shoes. The content is both uplifting and inspiring leaving the reader simply feeling good. Good luck in the voting and thank you very much for sharing it.


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    Thank you.
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Gail Denham
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Nicely done poem on footwear - and the picture showing Christ washing the feet of the disciples. Very well done. "Walk today where Jesus walked - and felt His presence there." - do you know that song. I love that one.
Nice poem


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reply by the author on 06-Aug-2019
    Thank you, Gail!
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You wish to walk in the sandals your Saviour wore, as you heard and got a message from Him; well said, well done. Liked and enjoyed the read. Keep Writing, Inspiring, Changing


 Comment Written 05-Aug-2019



reply by the author on 05-Aug-2019
    Thank you!!
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This is just a perfect offering for this contest -- how wonderful!! ;) Love your rhythm here and it just flows throughout with all of the rhyming both end and within...thank you for sharing!! ;) Good luck at the polls!


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    Thank you.
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