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Viewing comments for Chapter 13 "I Give You All of Me?"

A Book of Horror and Honor.

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Lulube
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heartfelt but humorous at the same time. cleverly written incorporating lyrics from many songs. always a fun way to write.
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 Comment Written 08-Aug-2019



reply by the author on 08-Aug-2019
    Thanks lulu!
    Ricky

reply by Lulube on 10-Aug-2019
    welcome
    Winter Spring Summer or Fall, All you have to do is call, And I'll be there, yes I will, You've got a friend.

    lulube

reply by the author on 11-Aug-2019
    Sweet Love.
    Ricky
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A very well-written heartfelt love poem. True love will not reject anything that is part of who they love. When we say we love someone we accept all of them, the whole package is what we get.


 Comment Written 08-Aug-2019



reply by the author on 08-Aug-2019
    True words.
    No better said.
    Ricky.
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This is a heartwrenching poem of love, with a feeling of. . .am I enough? Then also worrying about being loved for the good and the bad. We've all been there and it does seem you are your biggest critic. The writing says all the right words but as in most writing. . .it needs some editing. Many words should be removed so we don't lose the real meaning of your heart. Please read it outloud and look for the words that are most important. Then take a look again and see what you think. Love the vulnerability of this poem and the artwork as well.


 Comment Written 06-Aug-2019



reply by the author on 07-Aug-2019
    I found one on my own but thanks. All the others gave it its deserved five.
    Doctor Ricky 1024

reply by moongirlwriter on 07-Aug-2019
    I apologize if I've offended you. . .these were only MY thoughts and it is YOUR poem. If it works for you. . .that's all that really counts.
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Diana L Crawford
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Beautiful poem, Rick, so much emotion and so much care for yourself in this piece! I'm so glad that you can see through one who may not really be there for you! I love how you incorporated Roberta Flack's song in this! xo


 Comment Written 06-Aug-2019



reply by the author on 07-Aug-2019
    Glad you enjoyed this one Diana!
    Ricky.
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I like the intermingling of song lyrics with your thoughts and emotions concerning love. We need to be accepted for who we are because it shows that we are being valued as an individual. Everyone is different and true love means that we have found somebody who understands and appreciates the person we are inside.


 Comment Written 06-Aug-2019



reply by the author on 07-Aug-2019
    Glad y6ou enjoyed it Spangle.
    Ricky
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Very well said, everyone wants and needs love, whether it is to give or to have the most important thing is that it can be shared, and yes everyone's heart is hungry, very well done and thanks for sharing****kahpot


 Comment Written 06-Aug-2019



reply by the author on 06-Aug-2019
    Thanks****kahpot
    Ricky
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Y. M. Roger
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Wow .... although a love poem in some respects, it is also a bearing of the soul to show heartbreak in there as well. It is tough to try and get burned...not sure if I'd wish to navigate those waters again... Thank you for sharing! ;) Yvette


 Comment Written 06-Aug-2019



reply by the author on 06-Aug-2019
    Thanks Yvette.
    From my beginning of conception with my mother to My First Love at age 20 you only want to marry me and wanted my money to my wife of 20 years until an ex-girlfriend it's been or what you would say you don't wish to navigate those Waters again so I think I'm pretty much an expert on it now.
    Ricky
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This is lovely, Ricky. You are so very right in that everyone wants to be loved for who they are, the good and the not so good, and everyone has a heart that hungers for companionship. Well done and thank you very much for sharing it.


 Comment Written 06-Aug-2019



reply by the author on 06-Aug-2019
    Love can be a mystery First source I love you and what you first have two number one love yourself did your family your friends in your church and then there's I'm in love with you which is the best it's like two red roses intertwined green thorns bearing stem showing it's forever and a gift from God above.
    Thanks again Angel.
    Ricky
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