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Joan E.
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Thank you for sharing the exuberance of love in this free verse. I admired your alliteration of "s's" to add to its intensity, along with the vivid imagery and mood-setting artwork. Best wishes in the contest- Joan


 Comment Written 14-Sep-2019



reply by the author on 17-Oct-2019
    THank you very much andsorry for the delayed reply.
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Dear Sanku,

For to sail across the water is pure joy itself. In celebration of his coming. For I take you mean Christ who inspired all He met. Teaching love is the way that humans should exist. But will He come again? Perhaps, if we believe.

Regards,

Winslow


 Comment Written 13-Aug-2019



reply by the author on 16-Aug-2019
    Thank you very much for tis honour and for interpreting my poem in a spiritual way. i am particularly touched that you reviewed it when the promotion was over..thank you once again.
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Excellent poem that showed much.
I could see you soaring over the white
capped waves.
An easy read with a good pace that kept
this reader wanting to know if you found
your love.
Thank you.


 Comment Written 10-Aug-2019



reply by the author on 13-Aug-2019
    Thank you very much for stopping by.
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I could feel the mist of the water on my face and the joy of the memories as you swooped and swayed above the waters. I also felt your silent fear and despair over whether he will come again. Well written. Keep at it. V


 Comment Written 10-Aug-2019



reply by the author on 13-Aug-2019
    Thank you very much for taking time and reviewing .
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I like this. Even the seagulls envy your love...
The last verse is really beautiful and the whole post is very original and well written.
Thanks for sharing and good luck in the contest.


 Comment Written 10-Aug-2019



reply by the author on 13-Aug-2019
    Thank you very much for your beautiful words.
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Great alliteration and descriptive words. Loved how it went from "when" to "will" to the vulnerability in the question "Won't he..?" at the end. Beautiful work. Well done.


 Comment Written 10-Aug-2019



reply by the author on 13-Aug-2019
    I think you were one of the very few readers who caught on that point .Thank you very much for that.
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In my opinion, a beautiful rendering in both verse and image regarding the prompt - awaiting the return of love, actually, to once again revel in the joys of each other and the pleasure about them - much luck in the contest with this smoothly fluid, free verse poem...


 Comment Written 09-Aug-2019



reply by the author on 13-Aug-2019
    Thank you very much.

reply by evesayshi on 13-Aug-2019
    You're very welcome, Sanku...eve
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I like how you show the narrator exults in ecstasy with spirit rising high among the seagulls. (I suggest making the first two words one word.) And like all human emotional highs, there is danger that we could just as easily plummet as you show the doubt at the end.


 Comment Written 09-Aug-2019



reply by the author on 13-Aug-2019
    Thank you very much.You were one of the very few who caught that uncertainty and I thought it was very obvious
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Hi Sanku

This is terribly romantic and such imagery! I enjoyed the highs and lows of this one and think it would be so so wonderful for all to know such love. Good luck.

xoxo Kiwi


 Comment Written 09-Aug-2019



reply by the author on 13-Aug-2019
    Thank you very much for your review
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Interesting submission and perspective on the love of flight and comparison to the gulls. Thank you for Sharing your Gifts and Insightful poetry. Beautiful sentiments written and photo included.


 Comment Written 09-Aug-2019



reply by the author on 13-Aug-2019
    Thank you very much.
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