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On A High

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Mastery

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Hello my friend. Been a while since I have seen a post by you. This is a well constructed poem. I love your use of strong verbs throughout the entire piece.

Like: "

Sea gulls wheeled and screamed exultant
Surging waves hugged the sea
Spraying stardust in my eyes
And I am lifted! how I am lifted!
Sailing high, I met the haughty gulls
Smiling I told them how you and I
On summery winds, soared so high.
Swooping down to the waves I splashed,
Softly and whispered that you and I
Sighed in pure pleasure."

Good job, Santha. : ) Bob

Comment Written 09-Aug-2019

reply by the author on 13-Aug-2019

Thank you Bob. yes i have been very irregular. then posting a work also need a lot of time since it involves promoting and working up enough member cents to promote. And that involves reading as many posts are possible....

reply by Mastery on 13-Aug-2019

Oh I know. : ) Bob

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karenina

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I hope he does! If not, you have him with you, there in your heart for all time--wrapped in golden memories. Very endearing free verse...perhaps I am partial because I love the ocean so much? Nope. I love LOVE! (smile)--
Karenina

Comment Written 09-Aug-2019

reply by the author on 13-Aug-2019

Thank you very much for tat -smile- your review made me smile .

reply by karenina on 15-Aug-2019

I am so glad it brought you some joy.--Karenina

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dragonpoet

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This is a very whimsical free verse of new love or maybe the euphoria of making love. This woman seems to be wondering if the love will last.
Keep writing
Joan

Comment Written 09-Aug-2019

reply by the author on 13-Aug-2019

True .I intended it as whimsical and euphoria generating and hence I gave the title 'On A High.'Thank you for catching it .

reply by dragonpoet on 13-Aug-2019

You're welcome.

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DonandVicki

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Yes indeed, he will come again and bring with him the unconditional love that he has shown in the past. The photograph that you chose is perfect and inspires.

Comment Written 08-Aug-2019

reply by the author on 13-Aug-2019

Thank you for the reassurance -smile-

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susand3022

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Hi Sanku, Of course, he'll come... they always do... most always anyway. ;) This is a really pretty love poem. I enjoyed reading it very much. I love what you did with the prompt. :)

Comment Written 08-Aug-2019

reply by the author on 13-Aug-2019

Thank you very much ,yes he has to come ...

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This meets the contest requirements beautifully as you deliver a well penned Free Verse which simply exudes the exhilarating feelings love evokes. Good luck in the voting and thank you very much for sharing it.

Comment Written 08-Aug-2019

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Thank you very much.

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Bichon

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I loved the subtle love emotions in this poem while your heart also soars with the seagulls above you in the sky. Best of luck in the contest with your entry!

Comment Written 08-Aug-2019

reply by the author on 13-Aug-2019

Thank you very much.

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Spangle

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I love the fantastic imagery you're infused into your free verse poem. I lived across from the beach on a Caribbean island for many years and the salty scent and sounds are still at the forefront of my mind. Best wishes in the contest!

Comment Written 08-Aug-2019

reply by the author on 13-Aug-2019

Thank you very much. I am glad it brought you lovely memories.

reply by Spangle on 13-Aug-2019

:-)

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Darlene BoClair

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I like the artwork. I am amazed when artwork compliments the words of the poem. The calming blue, seagulls and water gives a beautiful romantic background. So many of the lines emulate love. So many words focus on loving relationships. Romantic words like smiling and sighs set the mood.
Best regards for the writing prompt entry.

Comment Written 08-Aug-2019

reply by the author on 13-Aug-2019

Thank you very much for writing these beautiful words.

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JanPerry

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This work has reached the exceptional level

An outstanding commentary of the beach and subsequent gulls which rally round. I enjoy your clever references and your pleas for him to come again. I like "dance on gentle winds".

Comment Written 08-Aug-2019

reply by the author on 13-Aug-2019

Thank you once again for these glittering stars.

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